五、书面表达
懂礼仪、守规矩是每一名学生必备的良好素养。无论身处何地，我们都要时刻规范自身的言行举止。请根据以下图片提示，写一篇90词左右的短文，谈一谈我们应当如何在校园和公共场所践行文明礼仪。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Students with Good Manners
As students, we should have good manners and follow rules. It’s important for us to behave correctly no matter where we are ______ .
In a word, good manners can make us better students and help build a nicer world.
Exercise 7 of Unit 5 of 8B Assessment & Further study
懂礼仪、守规矩是每一名学生必备的良好素养。无论身处何地，我们都要时刻规范自身的言行举止。请根据以下图片提示，写一篇90词左右的短文，谈一谈我们应当如何在校园和公共场所践行文明礼仪。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Students with Good Manners
As students, we should have good manners and follow rules. It’s important for us to behave correctly no matter where we are ______ .
In a word, good manners can make us better students and help build a nicer world.
Exercise 7 of Unit 5 of 8B Assessment & Further study
答案：Students with Good Manners
As students, we should have good manners and follow rules. It's important for us to
behave correctly no matter where we are.
At school, first of all, we must come to school on time every day. We should also
show respect for our teachers by greeting them politely. We need to be kind and ready to
help our classmates as well. Besides, we need to keep the school clean and tidy. We
shouldn't run in the hallway to avoid accidents.
In public places, we have to follow traffic rules carefully to stay safe. When we are
waiting for a bus or shopping in the store, we should wait in line patiently. Also, we
shouln't push past others even if someone is in our way. We should keep our voice down in
public places to avoid troubling people around us.
In a word, good manners can make us better students and help build a nicer world.
As students, we should have good manners and follow rules. It's important for us to
behave correctly no matter where we are.
At school, first of all, we must come to school on time every day. We should also
show respect for our teachers by greeting them politely. We need to be kind and ready to
help our classmates as well. Besides, we need to keep the school clean and tidy. We
shouldn't run in the hallway to avoid accidents.
In public places, we have to follow traffic rules carefully to stay safe. When we are
waiting for a bus or shopping in the store, we should wait in line patiently. Also, we
shouln't push past others even if someone is in our way. We should keep our voice down in
public places to avoid troubling people around us.
In a word, good manners can make us better students and help build a nicer world.
解析：
【分析】
首先，我们需要明确题目要求：围绕校园和公共场所的文明礼仪展开写作，开头结尾已给出，需补充90词左右的内容。解题思路如下：
1. 拆分写作模块：分为校园（At school）和公共场所（In public places）两部分，对应图片提示的要点。
2. 拓展要点：图片给出校园的2个要点（按时到校、尊重老师），需补充合理的校园礼仪，比如帮助同学、保持校园整洁、不在走廊奔跑；公共场所给出2个要点（遵守交通规则、排队），补充如不大声喧哗、不推挤他人等内容。
3. 组织语言：用逻辑连接词（first of all, also, besides等）串联内容，保证语句通顺，符合英语表达习惯，控制词数。
【解析】
1. 校园部分：先围绕提示的“按时到校”“尊重老师”展开，用“first of all, we must come to school on time every day. We should also show respect for our teachers by greeting them politely.”来表述，再补充“We need to be kind and ready to help our classmates as well. Besides, we need to keep the school clean and tidy. We shouldn't run in the hallway to avoid accidents.”丰富内容。
2. 公共场所部分：先写“follow traffic rules carefully to stay safe”，接着展开排队的场景“When we are waiting for a bus or shopping in the store, we should wait in line patiently.”，再补充“Also, we shouldn't push past others even if someone is in our way. We should keep our voice down in public places to avoid troubling people around us.”完善内容。
3. 整体衔接自然，符合题目要求的字数和主题，语言规范。
【答案】
Students with Good Manners
As students, we should have good manners and follow rules. It's important for us to
behave correctly no matter where we are.
At school, first of all, we must come to school on time every day. We should also
show respect for our teachers by greeting them politely. We need to be kind and ready to
help our classmates as well. Besides, we need to keep the school clean and tidy. We
shouldn't run in the hallway to avoid accidents.
In public places, we have to follow traffic rules carefully to stay safe. When we are
waiting for a bus or shopping in the store, we should wait in line patiently. Also, we
shouldn't push past others even if someone is in our way. We should keep our voice down in
public places to avoid troubling people around us.
In a word, good manners can make us better students and help build a nicer world.
【知识点】
1. 校园礼仪英语表达
2. 公共场所礼仪英语表达
3. 英语书面表达结构
【点评】
本文紧扣“文明礼仪”主题，分校园和公共场所两个场景展开，内容充实且符合图片提示，逻辑连接词的使用让文章层次清晰，语言流畅规范，符合题目要求的词数，能很好地展现学生对文明礼仪的理解与践行方法。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先，我们需要明确题目要求：围绕校园和公共场所的文明礼仪展开写作，开头结尾已给出，需补充90词左右的内容。解题思路如下：
1. 拆分写作模块：分为校园（At school）和公共场所（In public places）两部分，对应图片提示的要点。
2. 拓展要点：图片给出校园的2个要点（按时到校、尊重老师），需补充合理的校园礼仪，比如帮助同学、保持校园整洁、不在走廊奔跑；公共场所给出2个要点（遵守交通规则、排队），补充如不大声喧哗、不推挤他人等内容。
3. 组织语言：用逻辑连接词（first of all, also, besides等）串联内容，保证语句通顺，符合英语表达习惯，控制词数。
【解析】
1. 校园部分：先围绕提示的“按时到校”“尊重老师”展开，用“first of all, we must come to school on time every day. We should also show respect for our teachers by greeting them politely.”来表述，再补充“We need to be kind and ready to help our classmates as well. Besides, we need to keep the school clean and tidy. We shouldn't run in the hallway to avoid accidents.”丰富内容。
2. 公共场所部分：先写“follow traffic rules carefully to stay safe”，接着展开排队的场景“When we are waiting for a bus or shopping in the store, we should wait in line patiently.”，再补充“Also, we shouldn't push past others even if someone is in our way. We should keep our voice down in public places to avoid troubling people around us.”完善内容。
3. 整体衔接自然，符合题目要求的字数和主题，语言规范。
【答案】
Students with Good Manners
As students, we should have good manners and follow rules. It's important for us to
behave correctly no matter where we are.
At school, first of all, we must come to school on time every day. We should also
show respect for our teachers by greeting them politely. We need to be kind and ready to
help our classmates as well. Besides, we need to keep the school clean and tidy. We
shouldn't run in the hallway to avoid accidents.
In public places, we have to follow traffic rules carefully to stay safe. When we are
waiting for a bus or shopping in the store, we should wait in line patiently. Also, we
shouldn't push past others even if someone is in our way. We should keep our voice down in
public places to avoid troubling people around us.
In a word, good manners can make us better students and help build a nicer world.
【知识点】
1. 校园礼仪英语表达
2. 公共场所礼仪英语表达
3. 英语书面表达结构
【点评】
本文紧扣“文明礼仪”主题，分校园和公共场所两个场景展开，内容充实且符合图片提示，逻辑连接词的使用让文章层次清晰，语言流畅规范，符合题目要求的词数，能很好地展现学生对文明礼仪的理解与践行方法。
【难度系数】
0.7