典型例题 假定你是李华,你校将组织以“我最喜爱的音乐大师”为主题的英语征文比赛。请你根据下表信息写一篇短文参加评选,并给出你的推荐理由。注意:1. 短文必须包括表中所有内容,可适当增加细节;2. 100 词左右。

答案:My Favourite Music Master
The music master I admire most is Abing. He lived a terribly poor life: he had no house to live in and had to sleep on the street, and he even went blind because of serious illness. Even in such hard conditions, he created over 600 pieces of music, and his most famous work *Erquan Yingyue* is still widely played around the world now.
I respect him a lot. First, his music shows his true feelings about life and touches people deeply. Second, his strong will to stick to music even in poverty always encourages me to face difficulties bravely.
The music master I admire most is Abing. He lived a terribly poor life: he had no house to live in and had to sleep on the street, and he even went blind because of serious illness. Even in such hard conditions, he created over 600 pieces of music, and his most famous work *Erquan Yingyue* is still widely played around the world now.
I respect him a lot. First, his music shows his true feelings about life and touches people deeply. Second, his strong will to stick to music even in poverty always encourages me to face difficulties bravely.
解析:
本题为提纲类主题写作,贴合译林版九年级上册音乐相关单元的写作要求,写作需覆盖全部给定要点:首先完整介绍阿炳的生平,可补充合理细节完善人物经历,点明他创作600余首乐曲、代表作《二泉映月》的相关信息,再补充至少两点符合人物特质的推荐理由,全文控制在100词左右,使用符合九年级水平的词汇表达,逻辑通顺即可。