八、书面表达。（共10分）
中学时光如诗如歌。假设你是月光中学的张明，请根据下面的导图提示，以“My happy school life”为主题，用英语写一封电子邮件，向你的英国笔友James介绍你的校园生活。
要求：
1. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，要点全面。
2. 词数70左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称等信息。
Dear James，
I would like to tell you something about my life at Moonlight Middle School.
What about your school life? I hope to hear from you soon.
All the best，
Zhang Ming
中学时光如诗如歌。假设你是月光中学的张明，请根据下面的导图提示，以“My happy school life”为主题，用英语写一封电子邮件，向你的英国笔友James介绍你的校园生活。
要求：
1. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，要点全面。
2. 词数70左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称等信息。
Dear James，
I would like to tell you something about my life at Moonlight Middle School.
What about your school life? I hope to hear from you soon.
All the best，
Zhang Ming
答案：One possible version:
Dear James,
I would like to tell you something about my life at Moonlight Middle School.
Our school is big and modern. There are three classroom buildings, a library and a new playground.
We learn some more subjects this term. Among all the subjects, Geography is my favourite because I can learn a lot about different cities and countries. We also have some wonderful activities at school. There is a sports meeting and a fashion show every year. How exciting! What's more, all my teachers and classmates are kind.
I always have a good time at school. It's lucky for me to study in a school like this.
What about your school life? I hope to hear from you soon.
All the best,
Zhang Ming
Dear James,
I would like to tell you something about my life at Moonlight Middle School.
Our school is big and modern. There are three classroom buildings, a library and a new playground.
We learn some more subjects this term. Among all the subjects, Geography is my favourite because I can learn a lot about different cities and countries. We also have some wonderful activities at school. There is a sports meeting and a fashion show every year. How exciting! What's more, all my teachers and classmates are kind.
I always have a good time at school. It's lucky for me to study in a school like this.
What about your school life? I hope to hear from you soon.
All the best,
Zhang Ming
解析：
【分析】
本题要求以“My happy school life”为主题写邮件介绍校园生活，需紧扣导图给出的5个核心要点（学校设施、科目与喜爱的地理、校园活动、师生关系、个人感受），按照邮件格式，先承接已给开头，依次展开各要点，最后表达感受并收尾，确保语言通顺、要点齐全，符合初中英语写作要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头介绍学校设施：描述学校的规模及具体设施（三幢教学楼、图书馆、新操场）；
2. 说明科目情况：点明科目增多，引出最爱的地理学科并说明原因；
3. 介绍校园活动：列举运动会、时装表演两项活动；
4. 说明师生关系：表达老师和同学很友好；
5. 表达个人感受：总结校园生活的愉快，呼应主题，完成邮件结尾。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear James,
I would like to tell you something about my life at Moonlight Middle School.
Our school is big and modern. There are three classroom buildings, a library and a new playground.
We learn some more subjects this term. Among all the subjects, Geography is my favourite because I can learn a lot about different cities and countries. We also have some wonderful activities at school. There is a sports meeting and a fashion show every year. How exciting! What's more, all my teachers and classmates are kind.
I always have a good time at school. It's lucky for me to study in a school like this.
What about your school life? I hope to hear from you soon.
All the best,
Zhang Ming
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、英语书面表达
【点评】
本文紧扣导图所有要点，内容完整，语言流畅自然，符合邮件格式要求，用词准确，清晰完成了介绍校园生活的任务。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题要求以“My happy school life”为主题写邮件介绍校园生活，需紧扣导图给出的5个核心要点（学校设施、科目与喜爱的地理、校园活动、师生关系、个人感受），按照邮件格式，先承接已给开头，依次展开各要点，最后表达感受并收尾，确保语言通顺、要点齐全，符合初中英语写作要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头介绍学校设施：描述学校的规模及具体设施（三幢教学楼、图书馆、新操场）；
2. 说明科目情况：点明科目增多，引出最爱的地理学科并说明原因；
3. 介绍校园活动：列举运动会、时装表演两项活动；
4. 说明师生关系：表达老师和同学很友好；
5. 表达个人感受：总结校园生活的愉快，呼应主题，完成邮件结尾。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear James,
I would like to tell you something about my life at Moonlight Middle School.
Our school is big and modern. There are three classroom buildings, a library and a new playground.
We learn some more subjects this term. Among all the subjects, Geography is my favourite because I can learn a lot about different cities and countries. We also have some wonderful activities at school. There is a sports meeting and a fashion show every year. How exciting! What's more, all my teachers and classmates are kind.
I always have a good time at school. It's lucky for me to study in a school like this.
What about your school life? I hope to hear from you soon.
All the best,
Zhang Ming
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、英语书面表达
【点评】
本文紧扣导图所有要点，内容完整，语言流畅自然，符合邮件格式要求，用词准确，清晰完成了介绍校园生活的任务。
【难度系数】
0.7