八、书面表达。(共 15 分)
假设你是李萍,你收到了英国笔友 Sandy 的来信,请你根据她在信中所提到的内容,给她回一封信。词数不少于70,已给出部分不计入总词数。
Dear Li Ping,
I know you're designing new clothes now. Could you tell me some details(细节) about your design? What kind of clothes are you designing? What colours are they? What are they made of? Why do you design these clothes? What do your classmates think of your design?
Hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes,
Sandy
Dear Sandy,
Nice to hear from you. I would like to tell you everything about my design.
Here is my design for
All the best,
Li Ping
假设你是李萍,你收到了英国笔友 Sandy 的来信,请你根据她在信中所提到的内容,给她回一封信。词数不少于70,已给出部分不计入总词数。
Dear Li Ping,
I know you're designing new clothes now. Could you tell me some details(细节) about your design? What kind of clothes are you designing? What colours are they? What are they made of? Why do you design these clothes? What do your classmates think of your design?
Hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes,
Sandy
Dear Sandy,
Nice to hear from you. I would like to tell you everything about my design.
Here is my design for
a blouse and a skirt. The blouse is white and it's made of silk. White blouses have a clean look, and white matches any other colour. The silk blouse feels smooth and it's comfortable to wear. Pretty skirts are very popular with girls, so my design has a grey cotton skirt. The white blouse and the grey skirt go well with each other.
All my classmates think my design is perfect and they like it very much.
All the best,
Li Ping
答案:One possible version:
Dear Sandy,
Nice to hear from you. I would like to tell you everything about my design.
Here is my design for a blouse and a skirt. The blouse is white and it's made of silk. White blouses have a clean look, and white matches any other colour. The silk blouse feels smooth and it's comfortable to wear. Pretty skirts are very popular with girls, so my design has a grey cotton skirt. The white blouse and the grey skirt go well with each other.
All my classmates think my design is perfect and they like it very much.
All the best,
Li Ping
Dear Sandy,
Nice to hear from you. I would like to tell you everything about my design.
Here is my design for a blouse and a skirt. The blouse is white and it's made of silk. White blouses have a clean look, and white matches any other colour. The silk blouse feels smooth and it's comfortable to wear. Pretty skirts are very popular with girls, so my design has a grey cotton skirt. The white blouse and the grey skirt go well with each other.
All my classmates think my design is perfect and they like it very much.
All the best,
Li Ping
解析:
【分析】
本题要求以李萍的身份给英国笔友Sandy回信,需完整回答Sandy提出的5个问题:设计的服装类型、颜色、材质、设计原因、同学的看法。解题思路:①先确定贴近学生生活的设计主题(如女式衬衫和裙子);②对应每个问题逐一阐述,确保不遗漏要点;③遵循书信格式,使用已给出的开头,补充内容时语言要符合初中英语水平,词数不少于70;④最后检查是否完成所有要求,语句通顺自然。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:
1. 明确设计的服装:选择女式衬衫(blouse)和裙子(skirt),符合学生身份;
2. 说明颜色与材质:衬衫为白色,材质是丝绸(silk);裙子为灰色,材质是棉(cotton);
3. 解释设计原因:白色干净百搭,丝绸触感舒适;灰色裙子受女生欢迎,两者搭配协调;
4. 说明同学评价:同学认为设计很棒,非常喜欢;
5. 组织语言,确保语句通顺,符合书信语境,满足词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Sandy,
Nice to hear from you. I would like to tell you everything about my design.
Here is my design for a blouse and a skirt. The blouse is white and it's made of silk. White blouses have a clean look, and white matches any other colour. The silk blouse feels smooth and it's comfortable to wear. Pretty skirts are very popular with girls, so my design has a grey cotton skirt. The white blouse and the grey skirt go well with each other.
All my classmates think my design is perfect and they like it very much.
All the best,
Li Ping
【知识点】
英语书信写作、话题类书面表达
【点评】
本题为初中英语常规书面表达题,考查学生围绕指定话题组织语言、完成书信写作的能力,要求覆盖所有提问要点,语言通顺,符合格式要求,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以李萍的身份给英国笔友Sandy回信,需完整回答Sandy提出的5个问题:设计的服装类型、颜色、材质、设计原因、同学的看法。解题思路:①先确定贴近学生生活的设计主题(如女式衬衫和裙子);②对应每个问题逐一阐述,确保不遗漏要点;③遵循书信格式,使用已给出的开头,补充内容时语言要符合初中英语水平,词数不少于70;④最后检查是否完成所有要求,语句通顺自然。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:
1. 明确设计的服装:选择女式衬衫(blouse)和裙子(skirt),符合学生身份;
2. 说明颜色与材质:衬衫为白色,材质是丝绸(silk);裙子为灰色,材质是棉(cotton);
3. 解释设计原因:白色干净百搭,丝绸触感舒适;灰色裙子受女生欢迎,两者搭配协调;
4. 说明同学评价:同学认为设计很棒,非常喜欢;
5. 组织语言,确保语句通顺,符合书信语境,满足词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Sandy,
Nice to hear from you. I would like to tell you everything about my design.
Here is my design for a blouse and a skirt. The blouse is white and it's made of silk. White blouses have a clean look, and white matches any other colour. The silk blouse feels smooth and it's comfortable to wear. Pretty skirts are very popular with girls, so my design has a grey cotton skirt. The white blouse and the grey skirt go well with each other.
All my classmates think my design is perfect and they like it very much.
All the best,
Li Ping
【知识点】
英语书信写作、话题类书面表达
【点评】
本题为初中英语常规书面表达题,考查学生围绕指定话题组织语言、完成书信写作的能力,要求覆盖所有提问要点,语言通顺,符合格式要求,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6