八、书面表达。(共15分)
近期,阳光中学和美国友好学校举行笔友书信活动。假设你是王伟,现在你想把李雷介绍给你的笔友Daniel。请根据以下提示,用英语写一封80词左右的信,已给出部分不计入总词数。

Dear Daniel,
I would like to introduce my best friend Li Lei to you.
Yours,
Wang Wei
近期,阳光中学和美国友好学校举行笔友书信活动。假设你是王伟,现在你想把李雷介绍给你的笔友Daniel。请根据以下提示,用英语写一封80词左右的信,已给出部分不计入总词数。
Dear Daniel,
I would like to introduce my best friend Li Lei to you.
Yours,
Wang Wei
答案:One possible version:
Dear Daniel,
I would like to introduce my best friend Li Lei to you. He is 13 years old and in Class 1, Grade 7. He's interested in collecting stamps and good at Maths.
He likes eating sweet snacks, but he seldom exercises. He wants to change his lifestyle. He plans to eat more fruit and vegetables and do more exercise.
His favourite festival is the Spring Festival, because he can get many red packets.
He is nice to others. He often uses his pocket money to help children in poor areas.
Please write back soon.
Yours,
Wang Wei
Dear Daniel,
I would like to introduce my best friend Li Lei to you. He is 13 years old and in Class 1, Grade 7. He's interested in collecting stamps and good at Maths.
He likes eating sweet snacks, but he seldom exercises. He wants to change his lifestyle. He plans to eat more fruit and vegetables and do more exercise.
His favourite festival is the Spring Festival, because he can get many red packets.
He is nice to others. He often uses his pocket money to help children in poor areas.
Please write back soon.
Yours,
Wang Wei
解析:
【分析】本题为英语书信类书面表达题,要求根据表格中李雷的个人信息,给笔友Daniel写一封介绍信。解题思路如下:1. 明确书信格式,开头已给出,结尾需补全规范的书信结束语;2. 梳理表格中的所有要点:基本情况(年龄、班级)、兴趣爱好、生活方式及改变计划、喜欢的节日及原因、个人品性;3. 将这些要点用准确通顺的英语表达,控制在80词左右,确保语法正确、语句连贯,符合英语书信的语气。
【解析】首先承接开头介绍李雷的基本情况:He is 13 years old and in Class 1, Grade 7. 接着说明兴趣爱好:He's interested in collecting stamps and good at Maths. 然后阐述生活方式及改变计划:He likes eating sweet snacks, but he seldom exercises. He wants to change his lifestyle and plans to eat more fruit and vegetables and do more exercise. 再介绍喜欢的节日及原因:His favourite festival is the Spring Festival, because he can get many red packets. 最后说明个人品性:He is nice to others and often uses his pocket money to help children in poor areas. 结尾补充书信常用语Please write back soon,完成信件。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Daniel,
I would like to introduce my best friend Li Lei to you. He is 13 years old and in Class 1, Grade 7. He's interested in collecting stamps and good at Maths.
He likes eating sweet snacks, but he seldom exercises. He wants to change his lifestyle. He plans to eat more fruit and vegetables and do more exercise.
His favourite festival is the Spring Festival, because he can get many red packets.
He is nice to others. He often uses his pocket money to help children in poor areas.
Please write back soon.
Yours,
Wang Wei
【知识点】英语书信写作、书面表达、信息整合表达
【点评】本题考查学生整合信息并运用英语进行书面表达的能力,属于基础应用文写作题,要求学生准确传递给定的个人信息,符合书信格式,语言规范,适合七年级学生巩固英语写作基础。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】首先承接开头介绍李雷的基本情况:He is 13 years old and in Class 1, Grade 7. 接着说明兴趣爱好:He's interested in collecting stamps and good at Maths. 然后阐述生活方式及改变计划:He likes eating sweet snacks, but he seldom exercises. He wants to change his lifestyle and plans to eat more fruit and vegetables and do more exercise. 再介绍喜欢的节日及原因:His favourite festival is the Spring Festival, because he can get many red packets. 最后说明个人品性:He is nice to others and often uses his pocket money to help children in poor areas. 结尾补充书信常用语Please write back soon,完成信件。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Daniel,
I would like to introduce my best friend Li Lei to you. He is 13 years old and in Class 1, Grade 7. He's interested in collecting stamps and good at Maths.
He likes eating sweet snacks, but he seldom exercises. He wants to change his lifestyle. He plans to eat more fruit and vegetables and do more exercise.
His favourite festival is the Spring Festival, because he can get many red packets.
He is nice to others. He often uses his pocket money to help children in poor areas.
Please write back soon.
Yours,
Wang Wei
【知识点】英语书信写作、书面表达、信息整合表达
【点评】本题考查学生整合信息并运用英语进行书面表达的能力,属于基础应用文写作题,要求学生准确传递给定的个人信息,符合书信格式,语言规范,适合七年级学生巩固英语写作基础。
【难度系数】0.6