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主题分析
本单元，我们跟着Bobby改正乱扔香蕉皮的错误，和苏海、刘涛一起“拾荒慢跑”守护城市整洁。我们学会了描述文明与不文明行为，更懂得了保持环境干净的重要性。爱护环境就从身边小事做起：不乱扔垃圾、主动清理杂物，用行动让家园更干净美好！
思路点拨
主题分析
本单元，我们跟着Bobby改正乱扔香蕉皮的错误，和苏海、刘涛一起“拾荒慢跑”守护城市整洁。我们学会了描述文明与不文明行为，更懂得了保持环境干净的重要性。爱护环境就从身边小事做起：不乱扔垃圾、主动清理杂物，用行动让家园更干净美好！
思路点拨
答案：参考范文：
# Keep our city clean
Our city is very beautiful with many nice parks and tall buildings, but sometimes it becomes messy and dirty when people drop rubbish everywhere.
To keep our city clean, we will never throw rubbish on the ground. We can put all the rubbish into the bins. We can also plant more trees in the city, they will make the air clean and fresh. When we walk in the street or play in the park, we can pick up the rubbish we see and put it into the dustbin.
Our city is our warm home. Everyone should work together. We all should try our best to keep our city clean and make it more beautiful.
# Keep our city clean
Our city is very beautiful with many nice parks and tall buildings, but sometimes it becomes messy and dirty when people drop rubbish everywhere.
To keep our city clean, we will never throw rubbish on the ground. We can put all the rubbish into the bins. We can also plant more trees in the city, they will make the air clean and fresh. When we walk in the street or play in the park, we can pick up the rubbish we see and put it into the dustbin.
Our city is our warm home. Everyone should work together. We all should try our best to keep our city clean and make it more beautiful.
解析：
【分析】这是一篇以“Keep our city clean”为主题的英语话题写作题，解题思路需遵循题目给出的结构：开头点明城市现状（如城市美丽但存在脏乱问题），中间阐述保持城市干净的具体做法，结尾呼吁大家共同保护环境。按照这个思路组织语言，就能完成符合要求的作文。
【解析】写作时，开头先描述城市的现状，体现“美丽但有脏乱”的特点；中间部分列举保持城市清洁的具体措施，如不乱扔垃圾、投放垃圾桶、种树净化空气、主动捡拾垃圾等；结尾呼吁大家共同努力，强化环保意识，完成作文收尾。
【答案】参考范文：
# Keep our city clean
Our city is very beautiful with many nice parks and tall buildings, but sometimes it becomes messy and dirty when people drop rubbish everywhere.
To keep our city clean, we will never throw rubbish on the ground. We can put all the rubbish into the bins. We can also plant more trees in the city, they will make the air clean and fresh. When we walk in the street or play in the park, we can pick up the rubbish we see and put it into the dustbin.
Our city is our warm home. Everyone should work together. We all should try our best to keep our city clean and make it more beautiful.
【知识点】英语话题写作、环境保护主题
【点评】本题围绕“保持城市清洁”的主题展开写作，结构清晰，要求学生结合生活实际阐述环保做法，既考查英语语言表达能力，又渗透了环保意识的培养，符合单元学习目标。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作时，开头先描述城市的现状，体现“美丽但有脏乱”的特点；中间部分列举保持城市清洁的具体措施，如不乱扔垃圾、投放垃圾桶、种树净化空气、主动捡拾垃圾等；结尾呼吁大家共同努力，强化环保意识，完成作文收尾。
【答案】参考范文：
# Keep our city clean
Our city is very beautiful with many nice parks and tall buildings, but sometimes it becomes messy and dirty when people drop rubbish everywhere.
To keep our city clean, we will never throw rubbish on the ground. We can put all the rubbish into the bins. We can also plant more trees in the city, they will make the air clean and fresh. When we walk in the street or play in the park, we can pick up the rubbish we see and put it into the dustbin.
Our city is our warm home. Everyone should work together. We all should try our best to keep our city clean and make it more beautiful.
【知识点】英语话题写作、环境保护主题
【点评】本题围绕“保持城市清洁”的主题展开写作，结构清晰，要求学生结合生活实际阐述环保做法，既考查英语语言表达能力，又渗透了环保意识的培养，符合单元学习目标。
【难度系数】0.5
美丽的校园人人都爱，如何让我们的校园保持干净、美丽呢？请以“Keep our school clean”为题，写一篇作文，不少于60词。
Keep our school clean
Keep our school clean
Our school is a beautiful place. But sometimes, it is not clean. We should do many things to keep our school clean.
We will never throw rubbish everywhere. We will put all rubbish in the rubbish bin. We will also pick up litter when we see it on the ground. We will not draw on the walls or desks. We will look after our school trees and flowers. We will keep our classroom clean and tidy every day. We will ask our classmates to follow the school rules.
A clean school can make us healthy and happy. We will work together. I am sure our school will become cleaner and more beautiful.（答案不唯一）
A clean school can make us healthy and happy. We will work together. I am sure our school will become cleaner and more beautiful.（答案不唯一）
答案：Keep our school clean
Our school is a beautiful place. But sometimes, it is not clean. We should do many things to keep our school clean.
We will never throw rubbish everywhere. We will put all rubbish in the rubbish bin. We will also pick up litter when we see it on the ground. We will not draw on the walls or desks. We will look after our school trees and flowers. We will keep our classroom clean and tidy every day. We will ask our classmates to follow the school rules.
A clean school can make us healthy and happy. We will work together. I am sure our school will become cleaner and more beautiful.（答案不唯一）
Our school is a beautiful place. But sometimes, it is not clean. We should do many things to keep our school clean.
We will never throw rubbish everywhere. We will put all rubbish in the rubbish bin. We will also pick up litter when we see it on the ground. We will not draw on the walls or desks. We will look after our school trees and flowers. We will keep our classroom clean and tidy every day. We will ask our classmates to follow the school rules.
A clean school can make us healthy and happy. We will work together. I am sure our school will become cleaner and more beautiful.（答案不唯一）
解析：
【分析】首先审题，明确作文主题为“Keep our school clean”，需结合题目给出的三个维度（Why、How、Result）展开写作：第一步，说明原因（校园虽美丽但存在垃圾问题）；第二步，列举具体做法（如不随地扔垃圾、将垃圾放入垃圾桶、捡拾地面垃圾、不涂画墙壁和课桌、爱护校园花草、保持教室整洁等）；第三步，说明结果（校园会更干净美丽，利于学习生活）。写作时要注意语句通顺，词数不少于60词，符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】按照审题思路，先引出主题，说明校园现状（美丽但有垃圾），再列举具体做法，最后说明结果，组织成完整的作文：
Keep our school clean
Our school is a beautiful place. But sometimes, it is not clean. We should do many things to keep our school clean.
We will never throw rubbish everywhere. We will put all rubbish in the rubbish bin. We will also pick up litter when we see it on the ground. We will not draw on the walls or desks. We will look after our school trees and flowers. We will keep our classroom clean and tidy every day. We will ask our classmates to follow the school rules.
A clean school can make us healthy and happy. We will work together. I am sure our school will become cleaner and more beautiful.
【答案】Keep our school clean
Our school is a beautiful place. But sometimes, it is not clean. We should do many things to keep our school clean.
We will never throw rubbish everywhere. We will put all rubbish in the rubbish bin. We will also pick up litter when we see it on the ground. We will not draw on the walls or desks. We will look after our school trees and flowers. We will keep our classroom clean and tidy every day. We will ask our classmates to follow the school rules.
A clean school can make us healthy and happy. We will work together. I am sure our school will become cleaner and more beautiful.
【知识点】英语话题作文、英语应用文写作
【点评】该作文紧扣主题，结构清晰，按照题目提示的三个部分（原因、做法、结果）展开，内容具体可行，语句通顺，符合初中英语写作要求，能有效传达保持校园清洁的理念。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照审题思路，先引出主题，说明校园现状（美丽但有垃圾），再列举具体做法，最后说明结果，组织成完整的作文：
Keep our school clean
Our school is a beautiful place. But sometimes, it is not clean. We should do many things to keep our school clean.
We will never throw rubbish everywhere. We will put all rubbish in the rubbish bin. We will also pick up litter when we see it on the ground. We will not draw on the walls or desks. We will look after our school trees and flowers. We will keep our classroom clean and tidy every day. We will ask our classmates to follow the school rules.
A clean school can make us healthy and happy. We will work together. I am sure our school will become cleaner and more beautiful.
【答案】Keep our school clean
Our school is a beautiful place. But sometimes, it is not clean. We should do many things to keep our school clean.
We will never throw rubbish everywhere. We will put all rubbish in the rubbish bin. We will also pick up litter when we see it on the ground. We will not draw on the walls or desks. We will look after our school trees and flowers. We will keep our classroom clean and tidy every day. We will ask our classmates to follow the school rules.
A clean school can make us healthy and happy. We will work together. I am sure our school will become cleaner and more beautiful.
【知识点】英语话题作文、英语应用文写作
【点评】该作文紧扣主题，结构清晰，按照题目提示的三个部分（原因、做法、结果）展开，内容具体可行，语句通顺，符合初中英语写作要求，能有效传达保持校园清洁的理念。
【难度系数】0.6