七、书面表达。(共1小题;满分25分)
由于父母照顾得过于周到,现在许多中学生缺乏自理能力。请你根据下面表格中的内容,按要求用英语写一篇短文,谈谈作为中学生,我们应该如何培养自己的独立性。

【要求】1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确。
2. 内容涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥。
3. 词数90左右(已给出的部分不计入总词数)。
As middle school students, it's very important for us to be independent. What should we do to make us independent?
由于父母照顾得过于周到,现在许多中学生缺乏自理能力。请你根据下面表格中的内容,按要求用英语写一篇短文,谈谈作为中学生,我们应该如何培养自己的独立性。
【要求】1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确。
2. 内容涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥。
3. 词数90左右(已给出的部分不计入总词数)。
As middle school students, it's very important for us to be independent. What should we do to make us independent?
答案:One possible version:
As middle school students, it's very important for us to be independent. What should we do to make us independent?
First, we can begin with doing our own things. Why not start with cleaning our own bedrooms? We can also wash and put away our own clothes. And we can help with housework. We can do the dishes after meals or learn to cook some dishes. It must be cool to let the whole family enjoy the food cooked by us.
It is also important to do things actively. For example, we can make plans for the next week at weekends.
Last but not least, we can learn from model students. They set good examples for us to follow.
I think if we keep on doing these, we'll become more and more independent.
As middle school students, it's very important for us to be independent. What should we do to make us independent?
First, we can begin with doing our own things. Why not start with cleaning our own bedrooms? We can also wash and put away our own clothes. And we can help with housework. We can do the dishes after meals or learn to cook some dishes. It must be cool to let the whole family enjoy the food cooked by us.
It is also important to do things actively. For example, we can make plans for the next week at weekends.
Last but not least, we can learn from model students. They set good examples for us to follow.
I think if we keep on doing these, we'll become more and more independent.
解析:
【分析】本题要求根据表格中的四个核心要点(自己的事情自己做、帮忙做家务、积极做事情、向榜样学习),以英语短文形式阐述中学生培养独立性的方法,需满足语句通顺、涵盖所有要点、词数约90的要求。解题思路:先沿用给定开头,再用连接词(如first, also, last but not least)分点展开各要点,每个要点搭配具体例子(如打扫房间、洗餐具、制定计划等),最后总结升华,确保语法正确、内容连贯。
【解析】首先承接开头,用first引出“自己的事情自己做”,举例打扫卧室、洗自己的衣服;接着用also过渡到“帮忙做家务”,举例饭后洗餐具、学做饭;然后说明“积极做事情”,比如周末制定下周计划;最后用last but not least提到“向榜样学习”,说明榜样的示范作用;结尾总结坚持这些做法会变得更独立,控制词数,保证语言自然流畅。
【答案】One possible version:
As middle school students, it's very important for us to be independent. What should we do to make us independent?
First, we can begin with doing our own things. Why not start with cleaning our own bedrooms? We can also wash and put away our own clothes. And we can help with housework. We can do the dishes after meals or learn to cook some dishes. It must be cool to let the whole family enjoy the food cooked by us.
It is also important to do things actively. For example, we can make plans for the next week at weekends.
Last but not least, we can learn from model students. They set good examples for us to follow.
I think if we keep on doing these, we'll become more and more independent.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题写作
【点评】本题围绕“培养中学生独立性”展开,考查学生的英语语言组织能力与话题理解能力,要求结合给定要点适当发挥,是常见的英语写作题型,需注意语句通顺、要点齐全,难度适中。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先承接开头,用first引出“自己的事情自己做”,举例打扫卧室、洗自己的衣服;接着用also过渡到“帮忙做家务”,举例饭后洗餐具、学做饭;然后说明“积极做事情”,比如周末制定下周计划;最后用last but not least提到“向榜样学习”,说明榜样的示范作用;结尾总结坚持这些做法会变得更独立,控制词数,保证语言自然流畅。
【答案】One possible version:
As middle school students, it's very important for us to be independent. What should we do to make us independent?
First, we can begin with doing our own things. Why not start with cleaning our own bedrooms? We can also wash and put away our own clothes. And we can help with housework. We can do the dishes after meals or learn to cook some dishes. It must be cool to let the whole family enjoy the food cooked by us.
It is also important to do things actively. For example, we can make plans for the next week at weekends.
Last but not least, we can learn from model students. They set good examples for us to follow.
I think if we keep on doing these, we'll become more and more independent.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题写作
【点评】本题围绕“培养中学生独立性”展开,考查学生的英语语言组织能力与话题理解能力,要求结合给定要点适当发挥,是常见的英语写作题型,需注意语句通顺、要点齐全,难度适中。
【难度系数】0.5