七、书面表达。(共1小题;满分25分)(2025·江苏盐城东台第五教育联盟调研)
学校要成立动物保护社团,请同学们用英语写一篇有关动物保护的文章。请你选择一种濒危动物,介绍下这种动物濒危的原因以及我们该怎样保护它们。
【提示问题】1. What animal is in danger?
2. Why is this kind of animal in danger?
3. What can we do to save them?
【要求】1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范。
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。
3. 90词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Everyone knows animals are our friends.
学校要成立动物保护社团,请同学们用英语写一篇有关动物保护的文章。请你选择一种濒危动物,介绍下这种动物濒危的原因以及我们该怎样保护它们。
【提示问题】1. What animal is in danger?
2. Why is this kind of animal in danger?
3. What can we do to save them?
【要求】1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范。
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。
3. 90词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Everyone knows animals are our friends.
So we should be friendly to them.
The number of some animals is becoming smaller and smaller, such as pandas and golden monkeys. Golden monkeys are in danger now. Because people cut down too many trees, their living space is getting smaller and smaller. They can't get enough food. The environment is worse and worse for golden monkeys. Some people even kill them to get money.
We should let people know the importance of protecting animals. Protecting animals means protecting ourselves! I think our government should punish those people severely who kill wild animals. It's our duty to protect the endangered animals!
The number of some animals is becoming smaller and smaller, such as pandas and golden monkeys. Golden monkeys are in danger now. Because people cut down too many trees, their living space is getting smaller and smaller. They can't get enough food. The environment is worse and worse for golden monkeys. Some people even kill them to get money.
We should let people know the importance of protecting animals. Protecting animals means protecting ourselves! I think our government should punish those people severely who kill wild animals. It's our duty to protect the endangered animals!
答案:One possible version:
Everyone knows animals are our friends. So we should be friendly to them.
The number of some animals is becoming smaller and smaller, such as pandas and golden monkeys. Golden monkeys are in danger now. Because people cut down too many trees, their living space is getting smaller and smaller. They can't get enough food. The environment is worse and worse for golden monkeys. Some people even kill them to get money.
We should let people know the importance of protecting animals. Protecting animals means protecting ourselves! I think our government should punish those people severely who kill wild animals. It's our duty to protect the endangered animals!
Everyone knows animals are our friends. So we should be friendly to them.
The number of some animals is becoming smaller and smaller, such as pandas and golden monkeys. Golden monkeys are in danger now. Because people cut down too many trees, their living space is getting smaller and smaller. They can't get enough food. The environment is worse and worse for golden monkeys. Some people even kill them to get money.
We should let people know the importance of protecting animals. Protecting animals means protecting ourselves! I think our government should punish those people severely who kill wild animals. It's our duty to protect the endangered animals!
解析:
【分析】
首先审题明确要求:需以英语短文介绍一种濒危动物,说明其濒危原因及保护措施,开头已给出,90词左右,不得出现真实信息。解题思路:1. 选取熟悉的濒危动物(如金丝猴);2. 按提示问题分层展开:先点明濒危动物,再从生存空间、食物、猎杀等方面说明濒危原因,最后从宣传、政府监管、个人责任等角度提出保护措施;3. 确保语句通顺、语法正确,控制词数,规避真实信息。
【解析】
写作步骤:1. 衔接开头,点明主题后选择金丝猴作为濒危动物;2. 阐述濒危原因:人类砍伐树木压缩金丝猴生存空间,导致其食物不足,部分人猎杀牟利;3. 提出保护措施:宣传保护动物的重要性,政府严惩猎杀者,呼吁承担保护责任;4. 调整语句,确保连贯,符合词数要求,无真实信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
Everyone knows animals are our friends. So we should be friendly to them.
The number of some animals is becoming smaller and smaller, such as pandas and golden monkeys. Golden monkeys are in danger now. Because people cut down too many trees, their living space is getting smaller and smaller. They can't get enough food. The environment is worse and worse for golden monkeys. Some people even kill them to get money.
We should let people know the importance of protecting animals. Protecting animals means protecting ourselves! I think our government should punish those people severely who kill wild animals. It's our duty to protect the endangered animals!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、濒危动物保护
【点评】
本题考查学生英语综合运用能力,围绕动物保护主题覆盖提示问题,要求明确,符合初中英语写作考查方向,难度适中,学生易上手。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先审题明确要求:需以英语短文介绍一种濒危动物,说明其濒危原因及保护措施,开头已给出,90词左右,不得出现真实信息。解题思路:1. 选取熟悉的濒危动物(如金丝猴);2. 按提示问题分层展开:先点明濒危动物,再从生存空间、食物、猎杀等方面说明濒危原因,最后从宣传、政府监管、个人责任等角度提出保护措施;3. 确保语句通顺、语法正确,控制词数,规避真实信息。
【解析】
写作步骤:1. 衔接开头,点明主题后选择金丝猴作为濒危动物;2. 阐述濒危原因:人类砍伐树木压缩金丝猴生存空间,导致其食物不足,部分人猎杀牟利;3. 提出保护措施:宣传保护动物的重要性,政府严惩猎杀者,呼吁承担保护责任;4. 调整语句,确保连贯,符合词数要求,无真实信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
Everyone knows animals are our friends. So we should be friendly to them.
The number of some animals is becoming smaller and smaller, such as pandas and golden monkeys. Golden monkeys are in danger now. Because people cut down too many trees, their living space is getting smaller and smaller. They can't get enough food. The environment is worse and worse for golden monkeys. Some people even kill them to get money.
We should let people know the importance of protecting animals. Protecting animals means protecting ourselves! I think our government should punish those people severely who kill wild animals. It's our duty to protect the endangered animals!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、濒危动物保护
【点评】
本题考查学生英语综合运用能力,围绕动物保护主题覆盖提示问题,要求明确,符合初中英语写作考查方向,难度适中,学生易上手。
【难度系数】
0.5