七、书面表达。(共1小题;满分25分)
你校“The Wildlife Protection Society”正在招募新成员。假如你是Daniel,请你以“Protect the Earth and Love Animals”为题写一篇演讲稿,申请加入该协会。
【要求】1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点,要点顺序可调整,以使短文连贯通顺。
2. 90词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Protect the Earth and Love Animals
Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a speech on protecting the earth and loving wildlife.
你校“The Wildlife Protection Society”正在招募新成员。假如你是Daniel,请你以“Protect the Earth and Love Animals”为题写一篇演讲稿,申请加入该协会。
【要求】1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点,要点顺序可调整,以使短文连贯通顺。
2. 90词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Protect the Earth and Love Animals
Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a speech on protecting the earth and loving wildlife.
答案：One possible version:
Protect the Earth and Love Animals
Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a speech on protecting the earth and loving wildlife.
I'm an eighth grader. I'm honest and friendly. I love animals and nature. I am willing to share a home with other living things. However, our environment is becoming worse and worse. I hope to learn more about wild animals. Besides, I want to make more friends in this society. People cut down trees and forests, so many animals have nowhere to live. Many wild animals lose their living areas because we make more space for farms and buildings. Some hunters hunt animals for money, so many wild animals die because of this. The government should take action to protect the environment and wild animals. It also should make laws and plant more trees to protect them. As students, we should try our best to do something to protect them. If we all do something to protect them, we will have a better world.
That's all. Thank you very much!
Protect the Earth and Love Animals
Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a speech on protecting the earth and loving wildlife.
I'm an eighth grader. I'm honest and friendly. I love animals and nature. I am willing to share a home with other living things. However, our environment is becoming worse and worse. I hope to learn more about wild animals. Besides, I want to make more friends in this society. People cut down trees and forests, so many animals have nowhere to live. Many wild animals lose their living areas because we make more space for farms and buildings. Some hunters hunt animals for money, so many wild animals die because of this. The government should take action to protect the environment and wild animals. It also should make laws and plant more trees to protect them. As students, we should try our best to do something to protect them. If we all do something to protect them, we will have a better world.
That's all. Thank you very much!
解析：
【分析】本题为八年级英语书面表达中的应用文写作题，要求以Daniel的身份写一篇演讲稿申请加入野生动物保护协会。解题思路：1. 先提取表格中的所有核心要点：个人信息（八年级学生、诚实友善、热爱自然与动物、愿与其他生物共享家园）、加入理由（了解野生动物、想在协会交友）、野生动物面临的问题（生存区域丧失、被猎杀等）、希望（政府采取保护措施、学生尽力贡献）；2. 结合已给出的演讲稿开头，将要点用符合英语表达习惯的语句串联，注意词数控制在90左右，避免出现真实人名、校名；3. 检查是否涵盖所有要点，语句连贯，语气符合演讲的礼貌性。
【解析】首先承接开头介绍个人信息：I'm an eighth grader, honest and friendly. I love nature and animals, willing to share a home with other living things. 接着说明加入理由：I hope to learn more about wild animals and make friends in this society. 然后阐述野生动物面临的问题：Many wild animals lose their living areas because of human activities like cutting down trees, and some are hunted for money. 再表达希望：The government should make laws to protect them and plant more trees. As students, we should try our best to do something for wildlife. 最后收尾：If everyone takes action, we will have a better world. Thank you!
【答案】One possible version:
Protect the Earth and Love Animals
Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a speech on protecting the earth and loving wildlife.
I'm an eighth grader. I'm honest and friendly. I love animals and nature. I am willing to share a home with other living things. However, our environment is becoming worse and worse. I hope to learn more about wild animals. Besides, I want to make more friends in this society. People cut down trees and forests, so many animals have nowhere to live. Many wild animals lose their living areas because we make more space for farms and buildings. Some hunters hunt animals for money, so many wild animals die because of this. The government should take action to protect the environment and wild animals. It also should make laws and plant more trees to protect them. As students, we should try our best to do something to protect them. If we all do something to protect them, we will have a better world.
That's all. Thank you very much!
【知识点】英语书面表达、应用文写作、要点整合
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，完整涵盖所有表格要点，结构清晰，语言通顺自然，符合演讲稿的格式与语气，词数符合要求，是一篇符合标准的申请演讲稿。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先承接开头介绍个人信息：I'm an eighth grader, honest and friendly. I love nature and animals, willing to share a home with other living things. 接着说明加入理由：I hope to learn more about wild animals and make friends in this society. 然后阐述野生动物面临的问题：Many wild animals lose their living areas because of human activities like cutting down trees, and some are hunted for money. 再表达希望：The government should make laws to protect them and plant more trees. As students, we should try our best to do something for wildlife. 最后收尾：If everyone takes action, we will have a better world. Thank you!
【答案】One possible version:
Protect the Earth and Love Animals
Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a speech on protecting the earth and loving wildlife.
I'm an eighth grader. I'm honest and friendly. I love animals and nature. I am willing to share a home with other living things. However, our environment is becoming worse and worse. I hope to learn more about wild animals. Besides, I want to make more friends in this society. People cut down trees and forests, so many animals have nowhere to live. Many wild animals lose their living areas because we make more space for farms and buildings. Some hunters hunt animals for money, so many wild animals die because of this. The government should take action to protect the environment and wild animals. It also should make laws and plant more trees to protect them. As students, we should try our best to do something to protect them. If we all do something to protect them, we will have a better world.
That's all. Thank you very much!
【知识点】英语书面表达、应用文写作、要点整合
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，完整涵盖所有表格要点，结构清晰，语言通顺自然，符合演讲稿的格式与语气，词数符合要求，是一篇符合标准的申请演讲稿。
【难度系数】0.5