[典型例题]
假如你最好的朋友叫Lucy,你们两年前在图书馆相识,请你根据以下提示,以“My Best Friend”为题写一篇英语短文,向大家介绍一下她。90词左右。
[思路点拨]
高分模板
开头:介绍好友姓名、相识时间和地点
My Best Friend
Lucy is my ①best friend. I met her in the library two years ago.
主体:介绍好友外貌、性格、特长及其理想
She has smiling eyes and she always has a smile on her face. She has a round face and short hair. She is ①taller and slimmer than me.
Lucy is kind and helpful. ②She often gives up her seat to the old on the bus. She is good at singing and is a member of the Music Club in our school. Every morning, she practises singing.
She wants to be a singer when she grows up. ③I believe she will be one of the best singers in China some day.
结尾:表达对朋友的赞赏之情
What a good friend she is! I hope we will be good friends forever.
名师点评
①恰当运用本单元所学的比较级和最高级,体现了作者活学活用的能力。
②两个句子的描写恰到好处,详细地描述了人物的品质和能力。
③使用了复合句和“one of the + 形容词最高级+可数名词复数”结构,体现了作者深厚的英语功底。
假如你最好的朋友叫Lucy,你们两年前在图书馆相识,请你根据以下提示,以“My Best Friend”为题写一篇英语短文,向大家介绍一下她。90词左右。
[思路点拨]
高分模板
开头:介绍好友姓名、相识时间和地点
My Best Friend
Lucy is my ①best friend. I met her in the library two years ago.
主体:介绍好友外貌、性格、特长及其理想
She has smiling eyes and she always has a smile on her face. She has a round face and short hair. She is ①taller and slimmer than me.
Lucy is kind and helpful. ②She often gives up her seat to the old on the bus. She is good at singing and is a member of the Music Club in our school. Every morning, she practises singing.
She wants to be a singer when she grows up. ③I believe she will be one of the best singers in China some day.
结尾:表达对朋友的赞赏之情
What a good friend she is! I hope we will be good friends forever.
名师点评
①恰当运用本单元所学的比较级和最高级,体现了作者活学活用的能力。
②两个句子的描写恰到好处,详细地描述了人物的品质和能力。
③使用了复合句和“one of the + 形容词最高级+可数名词复数”结构,体现了作者深厚的英语功底。
答案：My Best Friend
Lucy is my best friend. I met her in the library two years ago.
She has smiling eyes, a round face and short hair. She is taller and slimmer than me. Lucy is kind and helpful, she often gives up her seat to the old on the bus. She is good at singing, and her future plan is to be a singer. I believe her dream will come true one day.
What a good friend she is! I hope we will be good friends forever.
Lucy is my best friend. I met her in the library two years ago.
She has smiling eyes, a round face and short hair. She is taller and slimmer than me. Lucy is kind and helpful, she often gives up her seat to the old on the bus. She is good at singing, and her future plan is to be a singer. I believe her dream will come true one day.
What a good friend she is! I hope we will be good friends forever.
解析：
【分析】
这是一篇英语记叙文写作题，要求以“My Best Friend”为题介绍好友Lucy。解题思路为：1. 开头点明好友姓名、相识的时间与地点；2. 主体部分依次介绍好友的外貌特征、性格品质、特长及未来理想，恰当运用比较级等语法知识丰富表达；3. 结尾表达对好友的赞赏及对友谊的期许，控制词数在90词左右，确保内容连贯、符合要求。
【解析】
按照写作思路，分三部分完成：开头直接点明核心信息；主体部分用具体事例展现性格与特长，运用比较级描述外貌差异；结尾抒发情感，确保语言准确、衔接自然，符合题目要求。具体内容如下：
My Best Friend
Lucy is my best friend. I met her in the library two years ago.
She has smiling eyes, a round face and short hair. She is taller and slimmer than me. Lucy is kind and helpful, she often gives up her seat to the old on the bus. She is good at singing, and her future plan is to be a singer. I believe her dream will come true one day.
What a good friend she is! I hope we will be good friends forever.
【答案】
My Best Friend
Lucy is my best friend. I met her in the library two years ago.
She has smiling eyes, a round face and short hair. She is taller and slimmer than me. Lucy is kind and helpful, she often gives up her seat to the old on the bus. She is good at singing, and her future plan is to be a singer. I believe her dream will come true one day.
What a good friend she is! I hope we will be good friends forever.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、形容词比较级、复合句
【点评】
本文结构清晰，内容具体，准确介绍了好友Lucy的相关信息，恰当运用了比较级、复合句等语法知识，语言流畅，符合90词左右的要求，是一篇符合题目要求的优秀英语短文。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一篇英语记叙文写作题，要求以“My Best Friend”为题介绍好友Lucy。解题思路为：1. 开头点明好友姓名、相识的时间与地点；2. 主体部分依次介绍好友的外貌特征、性格品质、特长及未来理想，恰当运用比较级等语法知识丰富表达；3. 结尾表达对好友的赞赏及对友谊的期许，控制词数在90词左右，确保内容连贯、符合要求。
【解析】
按照写作思路，分三部分完成：开头直接点明核心信息；主体部分用具体事例展现性格与特长，运用比较级描述外貌差异；结尾抒发情感，确保语言准确、衔接自然，符合题目要求。具体内容如下：
My Best Friend
Lucy is my best friend. I met her in the library two years ago.
She has smiling eyes, a round face and short hair. She is taller and slimmer than me. Lucy is kind and helpful, she often gives up her seat to the old on the bus. She is good at singing, and her future plan is to be a singer. I believe her dream will come true one day.
What a good friend she is! I hope we will be good friends forever.
【答案】
My Best Friend
Lucy is my best friend. I met her in the library two years ago.
She has smiling eyes, a round face and short hair. She is taller and slimmer than me. Lucy is kind and helpful, she often gives up her seat to the old on the bus. She is good at singing, and her future plan is to be a singer. I believe her dream will come true one day.
What a good friend she is! I hope we will be good friends forever.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、形容词比较级、复合句
【点评】
本文结构清晰，内容具体，准确介绍了好友Lucy的相关信息，恰当运用了比较级、复合句等语法知识，语言流畅，符合90词左右的要求，是一篇符合题目要求的优秀英语短文。
【难度系数】
0.5