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假设你有一位朋友叫Daniel,请你根据下面要点所列的四个方面,写一篇80—100词的英语短文来介绍Daniel。文章标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。文章内容必须包括以下要点:
1.外貌和性格特点；
2.优秀品德,并举例说明；
3.特长爱好；
4.未来计划。
My friend Daniel
I have a wonderful friend named Daniel. I’d like to tell you something about him.
假设你有一位朋友叫Daniel,请你根据下面要点所列的四个方面,写一篇80—100词的英语短文来介绍Daniel。文章标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。文章内容必须包括以下要点:
1.外貌和性格特点；
2.优秀品德,并举例说明；
3.特长爱好；
4.未来计划。
My friend Daniel
I have a wonderful friend named Daniel. I’d like to tell you something about him.
Daniel is the tallest boy in our class. There is always a smile on his face. He has a very good sense of humour. He often tells funny jokes to make us laugh happily.
He is generous and helpful. He is always willing to share his things and help others. He often gives up his seat to people in need on the bus.
He has many hobbies, such as swimming and playing basketball. He can play basketball very well.
He would like to be a social worker because he wants to help more people.
答案：1. 外貌和性格特点：Daniel is the tallest boy in our class. There is always a smile on his face. He has a very good sense of humour. He often tells funny jokes to make us laugh happily.
2. 优秀品德,并举例说明：He is generous and helpful. He is always willing to share his things and help others. He often gives up his seat to people in need on the bus.
3. 特长爱好：He has many hobbies, such as swimming and playing basketball. He can play basketball very well.
4. 未来计划：He would like to be a social worker because he wants to help more people.
One possible version :
My friend Daniel
I have a wonderful friend named Daniel. I'd like to tell you something about him.
Daniel is the tallest boy in our class. There is always a smile on his face. He has a very good sense of humour. He often tells funny jokes to make us laugh happily.
He is generous and helpful. He is always willing to share his things and help others. He often gives up his seat to people in need on the bus. He has many hobbies, such as swimming and playing basketball. He can play basketball very well.
He would like to be a social worker because he wants to help more people.
2. 优秀品德,并举例说明：He is generous and helpful. He is always willing to share his things and help others. He often gives up his seat to people in need on the bus.
3. 特长爱好：He has many hobbies, such as swimming and playing basketball. He can play basketball very well.
4. 未来计划：He would like to be a social worker because he wants to help more people.
One possible version :
My friend Daniel
I have a wonderful friend named Daniel. I'd like to tell you something about him.
Daniel is the tallest boy in our class. There is always a smile on his face. He has a very good sense of humour. He often tells funny jokes to make us laugh happily.
He is generous and helpful. He is always willing to share his things and help others. He often gives up his seat to people in need on the bus. He has many hobbies, such as swimming and playing basketball. He can play basketball very well.
He would like to be a social worker because he wants to help more people.
解析：
【分析】本题为英语应用文写作题，要求根据给定的四个要点（外貌性格特点、优秀品德及举例、特长爱好、未来计划）介绍朋友Daniel，需注意词数80-100，开头已给出，写作时要将四个要点自然衔接，用准确通顺的英语表达，确保覆盖所有要求的内容。
【解析】1. 明确写作结构：开头已提供，正文依次围绕四个指定要点展开；2. 内容填充：①外貌性格：描述Daniel是班级最高的男孩，常带微笑，有幽默感，会讲笑话逗大家；②优秀品德：说明他慷慨乐于助人，举例在公交车上给有需要的人让座；③特长爱好：提及爱好游泳和篮球，篮球打得好；④未来计划：想成为社工帮助更多人；3. 检查确认：确保词数符合要求，语言通顺，所有要点均覆盖。
【答案】My friend Daniel
I have a wonderful friend named Daniel. I'd like to tell you something about him.
Daniel is the tallest boy in our class. There is always a smile on his face. He has a very good sense of humour. He often tells funny jokes to make us laugh happily.
He is generous and helpful. He is always willing to share his things and help others. He often gives up his seat to people in need on the bus. He has many hobbies, such as swimming and playing basketball. He can play basketball very well.
He would like to be a social worker because he wants to help more people.
【知识点】英语应用文写作，要点式短文写作
【点评】本题考查学生整合信息、用英语组织短文的基础写作能力，要求学生根据给定要点完成内容，语言难度适中，适合巩固英语写作基础。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】1. 明确写作结构：开头已提供，正文依次围绕四个指定要点展开；2. 内容填充：①外貌性格：描述Daniel是班级最高的男孩，常带微笑，有幽默感，会讲笑话逗大家；②优秀品德：说明他慷慨乐于助人，举例在公交车上给有需要的人让座；③特长爱好：提及爱好游泳和篮球，篮球打得好；④未来计划：想成为社工帮助更多人；3. 检查确认：确保词数符合要求，语言通顺，所有要点均覆盖。
【答案】My friend Daniel
I have a wonderful friend named Daniel. I'd like to tell you something about him.
Daniel is the tallest boy in our class. There is always a smile on his face. He has a very good sense of humour. He often tells funny jokes to make us laugh happily.
He is generous and helpful. He is always willing to share his things and help others. He often gives up his seat to people in need on the bus. He has many hobbies, such as swimming and playing basketball. He can play basketball very well.
He would like to be a social worker because he wants to help more people.
【知识点】英语应用文写作，要点式短文写作
【点评】本题考查学生整合信息、用英语组织短文的基础写作能力，要求学生根据给定要点完成内容，语言难度适中，适合巩固英语写作基础。
【难度系数】0.3