写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D29
「2026湖南衡阳八中教育集团期末」
亲爱的同学们,你们经历了一个学期的初中生活。在这里,你逐渐习惯了忙碌的校园生活,结交了新朋友,学习了新的课程,也参加了丰富多彩的校园活动。假如你是李华,你的美国好朋友彼得想了解你在新学校的校园生活,请结合以下五个要点,给他回一封电子邮件。
要求:1.短文必须包含表格中的所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实人名、班级和校名;
3.不少于70词,开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your letter. To answer your questions, I will tell you about my middle school life.
Yours,
Li Hua
「2026湖南衡阳八中教育集团期末」
亲爱的同学们,你们经历了一个学期的初中生活。在这里,你逐渐习惯了忙碌的校园生活,结交了新朋友,学习了新的课程,也参加了丰富多彩的校园活动。假如你是李华,你的美国好朋友彼得想了解你在新学校的校园生活,请结合以下五个要点,给他回一封电子邮件。
要求:1.短文必须包含表格中的所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实人名、班级和校名;
3.不少于70词,开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your letter. To answer your questions, I will tell you about my middle school life.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案：第5课时 主题写作专项
基础版范文
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your letter. To answer your questions, I will tell you about my middle school life.
My school is big and beautiful. It has a large playground. I get up at 6:30 a.m. every day. School begins at 8:00 a.m. and finishes at 4:00 p.m. After school, I do homework and have dinner. I go to bed at 10:00 p.m. We have seven classes every day. I have some classes like maths, Chinese and English. My favorite subject is English because it is fun. I like playing basketball in the sports club. I can do it well because I practice a lot.
I feel very happy here. I have many new friends and enjoy the school activities.
Yours,
Li Hua
进阶版范文
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your letter. To answer your questions, I will tell you about my middle school life.
First, I'd like to introduce my school to you. It is a big and beautiful place with a large playground. I like my school very much.
Then, let me tell you about my school day routine. I get up at 6:30 a.m. every day. School begins at 8:00 a.m. and finishes at 4:00 p.m. After school, I do homework and have dinner. I go to bed at 10:00 p.m.
Next, I want to tell you about my school subjects. We have seven classes every day, including maths, Chinese, and English. My favorite subject is English because it is fun.
Finally, let me tell you about my school activities. I like playing basketball in the sports club. I can do it well because I practice a lot.
In a word, I feel very happy here. I have many new friends and enjoy the school activities.
Yours,
Li Hua
基础版范文
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your letter. To answer your questions, I will tell you about my middle school life.
My school is big and beautiful. It has a large playground. I get up at 6:30 a.m. every day. School begins at 8:00 a.m. and finishes at 4:00 p.m. After school, I do homework and have dinner. I go to bed at 10:00 p.m. We have seven classes every day. I have some classes like maths, Chinese and English. My favorite subject is English because it is fun. I like playing basketball in the sports club. I can do it well because I practice a lot.
I feel very happy here. I have many new friends and enjoy the school activities.
Yours,
Li Hua
进阶版范文
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your letter. To answer your questions, I will tell you about my middle school life.
First, I'd like to introduce my school to you. It is a big and beautiful place with a large playground. I like my school very much.
Then, let me tell you about my school day routine. I get up at 6:30 a.m. every day. School begins at 8:00 a.m. and finishes at 4:00 p.m. After school, I do homework and have dinner. I go to bed at 10:00 p.m.
Next, I want to tell you about my school subjects. We have seven classes every day, including maths, Chinese, and English. My favorite subject is English because it is fun.
Finally, let me tell you about my school activities. I like playing basketball in the sports club. I can do it well because I practice a lot.
In a word, I feel very happy here. I have many new friends and enjoy the school activities.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析：
【分析】首先明确写作任务：以李华的身份给美国朋友彼得回邮件，介绍初中校园生活，需涵盖表格中所有要点（学校情况、日常作息、课程、活动、感受），适当发挥，字数不少于70词，不得出现真实信息。写作思路：先承接已给开头引出主题，依次对应表格要点展开：介绍学校（体现big and beautiful的特点）、说明日常作息（起床、上课放学时间、睡觉时间）、讲解课程（七门课、最喜欢的科目及原因）、介绍校园活动（喜欢的俱乐部、擅长的原因），最后表达自身感受，确保结构清晰、要点齐全。
【解析】写作时，先利用已给开头引出主题；接着介绍学校，补充合理细节体现“big and beautiful”；然后说明日常作息，包含起床、上学放学时间、睡觉时间，可适当加课后安排；再讲课程，明确七门课，说明最喜欢的科目及原因；之后介绍校园活动，说明喜欢的俱乐部、擅长的原因；最后表达感受，确保所有表格要点都被覆盖，适当发挥，符合邮件格式和字数要求。
【答案】Dear Peter,
Thanks for your letter. To answer your questions, I will tell you about my middle school life.
My school is big and beautiful. It has a large playground. I get up at 6:30 a.m. every day. School begins at 8:00 a.m. and finishes at 4:00 p.m. After school, I do homework and have dinner. I go to bed at 10:00 p.m. We have seven classes every day. I have some classes like maths, Chinese and English. My favorite subject is English because it is fun. I like playing basketball in the sports club. I can do it well because I practice a lot.
I feel very happy here. I have many new friends and enjoy the school activities.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语应用文写作；校园生活话题；句子结构运用
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖表格所有要点，结构清晰、层次分明，语言通顺自然，符合初中英语写作规范，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】写作时，先利用已给开头引出主题；接着介绍学校，补充合理细节体现“big and beautiful”；然后说明日常作息，包含起床、上学放学时间、睡觉时间，可适当加课后安排；再讲课程，明确七门课，说明最喜欢的科目及原因；之后介绍校园活动，说明喜欢的俱乐部、擅长的原因；最后表达感受，确保所有表格要点都被覆盖，适当发挥，符合邮件格式和字数要求。
【答案】Dear Peter,
Thanks for your letter. To answer your questions, I will tell you about my middle school life.
My school is big and beautiful. It has a large playground. I get up at 6:30 a.m. every day. School begins at 8:00 a.m. and finishes at 4:00 p.m. After school, I do homework and have dinner. I go to bed at 10:00 p.m. We have seven classes every day. I have some classes like maths, Chinese and English. My favorite subject is English because it is fun. I like playing basketball in the sports club. I can do it well because I practice a lot.
I feel very happy here. I have many new friends and enjoy the school activities.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语应用文写作；校园生活话题；句子结构运用
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖表格所有要点，结构清晰、层次分明，语言通顺自然，符合初中英语写作规范，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.7