写作实例
审主题 审人称：以第一人称为主 审时态：一般现在时
假如你是李明，你是学校英语社团的成员之一。本周二是你们社团的活动日。本周讨论的话题是“How do you celebrate your birthday?”。请你根据提示内容，写一篇短文介绍自己通常如何过生日。
提示：1.Who do you celebrate your birthday with?
2.What food do you have on your birthday?
3.What do you do on your birthday?
要求：1.必须包含上述提示内容，可适当发挥；2.词数70左右。
写作支架
在写作时，要注意开头和结尾。在开头部分可以巧妙地引出主题。比如，可以以提问的方式引出话题。如：Do you know what sport I like best?你知道我最喜欢什么运动吗？
初中英语
七年级
上册
人教版
教材原文
P72 My birthday is on 13th June.
P72 On that day, I always eat birthday noodles with eggs.
P72 Long noodles are a symbol of long life.
优秀范文
My name is Li Ming. My birthday is on 13th June. Let me tell you how I usually celebrate my birthday.①
I usually celebrate it with my family. We often have dinner together. On that day, I always eat birthday noodles with eggs. Long noodles are a symbol of long life.② After dinner, we sing the birthday song together and I blow out the candles on my cake. I can always get a lot of birthday presents from my family.
In a word, celebrating my birthday with my family is really great.③
8
智慧背囊
亮点评析
①首段以祈使句引起下文。
②介绍“长寿面”的文化意义，使文章内容更丰富。
③ 使用了“In a word...”总结全文，和首段相呼应。
审主题 审人称：以第一人称为主 审时态：一般现在时
假如你是李明，你是学校英语社团的成员之一。本周二是你们社团的活动日。本周讨论的话题是“How do you celebrate your birthday?”。请你根据提示内容，写一篇短文介绍自己通常如何过生日。
提示：1.Who do you celebrate your birthday with?
2.What food do you have on your birthday?
3.What do you do on your birthday?
要求：1.必须包含上述提示内容，可适当发挥；2.词数70左右。
写作支架
在写作时，要注意开头和结尾。在开头部分可以巧妙地引出主题。比如，可以以提问的方式引出话题。如：Do you know what sport I like best?你知道我最喜欢什么运动吗？
初中英语
七年级
上册
人教版
教材原文
P72 My birthday is on 13th June.
P72 On that day, I always eat birthday noodles with eggs.
P72 Long noodles are a symbol of long life.
优秀范文
My name is Li Ming. My birthday is on 13th June. Let me tell you how I usually celebrate my birthday.①
I usually celebrate it with my family. We often have dinner together. On that day, I always eat birthday noodles with eggs. Long noodles are a symbol of long life.② After dinner, we sing the birthday song together and I blow out the candles on my cake. I can always get a lot of birthday presents from my family.
In a word, celebrating my birthday with my family is really great.③
8
智慧背囊
亮点评析
①首段以祈使句引起下文。
②介绍“长寿面”的文化意义，使文章内容更丰富。
③ 使用了“In a word...”总结全文，和首段相呼应。
答案：My name is Li Ming. My birthday is on 13th June. Let me tell you how I usually celebrate my birthday.
I usually celebrate it with my family. We often have dinner together. On that day, I always eat birthday noodles with eggs. Long noodles are a symbol of long life. After dinner, we sing the birthday song together and I blow out the candles on my cake. I can always get a lot of birthday presents from my family.
In a word, celebrating my birthday with my family is really great.
I usually celebrate it with my family. We often have dinner together. On that day, I always eat birthday noodles with eggs. Long noodles are a symbol of long life. After dinner, we sing the birthday song together and I blow out the candles on my cake. I can always get a lot of birthday presents from my family.
In a word, celebrating my birthday with my family is really great.
解析：
【分析】
本题要求以第一人称、一般现在时，围绕“How do you celebrate your birthday?”写一篇介绍生日庆祝方式的英语短文，需包含与谁庆祝、吃什么、做什么的提示内容。解题思路：1. 开头部分，先点明姓名和生日，用高分句式引出生日庆祝的话题；2. 中间部分，详细描述庆祝细节：和谁一起、共同活动、生日食物（结合教材中长寿面的文化）、晚餐后的活动、收到礼物；3. 结尾用总结性句式呼应开头，表达感受，确保符合词数要求。
【解析】
按照写作要求，结合提示与教材内容，依次完成各部分：开头介绍姓名（Li Ming）和生日（13th June），用高分句式“Let me tell you how I usually celebrate my birthday.”引出下文；中间说明和家人庆祝，一起吃晚餐，吃带鸡蛋的生日面（说明是长寿的象征），晚餐后唱生日歌、吹蜡烛，收到家人的礼物；结尾用“In a word...”总结，表达和家人庆祝生日很棒，符合要求。
【答案】
My name is Li Ming. My birthday is on 13th June. Let me tell you how I usually celebrate my birthday.
I usually celebrate it with my family. We often have dinner together. On that day, I always eat birthday noodles with eggs. Long noodles are a symbol of long life. After dinner, we sing the birthday song together and I blow out the candles on my cake. I can always get a lot of birthday presents from my family.
In a word, celebrating my birthday with my family is really great.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作；一般现在时；生日话题表达
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，包含所有提示内容，结构清晰（开头引出-中间详述-结尾总结），运用高分句式引出话题和总结全文，还融入了长寿面的文化内涵，内容丰富，符合七年级英语写作的要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以第一人称、一般现在时，围绕“How do you celebrate your birthday?”写一篇介绍生日庆祝方式的英语短文，需包含与谁庆祝、吃什么、做什么的提示内容。解题思路：1. 开头部分，先点明姓名和生日，用高分句式引出生日庆祝的话题；2. 中间部分，详细描述庆祝细节：和谁一起、共同活动、生日食物（结合教材中长寿面的文化）、晚餐后的活动、收到礼物；3. 结尾用总结性句式呼应开头，表达感受，确保符合词数要求。
【解析】
按照写作要求，结合提示与教材内容，依次完成各部分：开头介绍姓名（Li Ming）和生日（13th June），用高分句式“Let me tell you how I usually celebrate my birthday.”引出下文；中间说明和家人庆祝，一起吃晚餐，吃带鸡蛋的生日面（说明是长寿的象征），晚餐后唱生日歌、吹蜡烛，收到家人的礼物；结尾用“In a word...”总结，表达和家人庆祝生日很棒，符合要求。
【答案】
My name is Li Ming. My birthday is on 13th June. Let me tell you how I usually celebrate my birthday.
I usually celebrate it with my family. We often have dinner together. On that day, I always eat birthday noodles with eggs. Long noodles are a symbol of long life. After dinner, we sing the birthday song together and I blow out the candles on my cake. I can always get a lot of birthday presents from my family.
In a word, celebrating my birthday with my family is really great.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作；一般现在时；生日话题表达
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，包含所有提示内容，结构清晰（开头引出-中间详述-结尾总结），运用高分句式引出话题和总结全文，还融入了长寿面的文化内涵，内容丰富，符合七年级英语写作的要求。
【难度系数】
0.6