写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D33
「2026 四川达州通川期末改编」
生日对我们每个人而言都很重要，怎样过一个有意义的生日呢？我们学校的英语社团围绕“How do I celebrate your birthday?”这一话题展开讨论。假如你是社团成员李华，请根据以下内容提示，撰写一篇英语短文，向社团成员们分享你庆祝生日的方式。
内容提示：
注意:1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
3.70词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How do I celebrate my birthday?
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. I'm 13 years old, and my birthday is on
「2026 四川达州通川期末改编」
生日对我们每个人而言都很重要，怎样过一个有意义的生日呢？我们学校的英语社团围绕“How do I celebrate your birthday?”这一话题展开讨论。假如你是社团成员李华，请根据以下内容提示，撰写一篇英语短文，向社团成员们分享你庆祝生日的方式。
内容提示：
注意:1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
3.70词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How do I celebrate my birthday?
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. I'm 13 years old, and my birthday is on
May 10th
答案：第5课时 主题写作专项
＞ 基础版范文
How do I celebrate my birthday?
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. I'm 13 years old, and my birthday is on May 10th.
In the morning, I eat long noodles. My mother cooks the noodles for me. Then I visit my grandparents on the farm with my parents. In the afternoon, we plant a tree together. I plant one every year. In the evening, I have a birthday party with my friends. We eat the birthday cake, sing, dance and play games together. I feel very happy because my birthday is meaningful.
＞ 进阶版范文
How do I celebrate my birthday?
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. I'm 13 years old, and my birthday is on May 10th.
In the morning, I eat long noodles made by my mother. Eating long noodles has a good wish for a long life. Then I visit my grandparents with my parents. They live on a farm. In the afternoon, we plant a tree together. I plant one every year. It is one of my traditions to plant a tree on my birthday. In the evening, I have a birthday party with my friends. We eat the birthday cake, sing, dance and play games together. I feel very happy at the party. I think that I have a meaningful birthday.
＞ 基础版范文
How do I celebrate my birthday?
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. I'm 13 years old, and my birthday is on May 10th.
In the morning, I eat long noodles. My mother cooks the noodles for me. Then I visit my grandparents on the farm with my parents. In the afternoon, we plant a tree together. I plant one every year. In the evening, I have a birthday party with my friends. We eat the birthday cake, sing, dance and play games together. I feel very happy because my birthday is meaningful.
＞ 进阶版范文
How do I celebrate my birthday?
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. I'm 13 years old, and my birthday is on May 10th.
In the morning, I eat long noodles made by my mother. Eating long noodles has a good wish for a long life. Then I visit my grandparents with my parents. They live on a farm. In the afternoon, we plant a tree together. I plant one every year. It is one of my traditions to plant a tree on my birthday. In the evening, I have a birthday party with my friends. We eat the birthday cake, sing, dance and play games together. I feel very happy at the party. I think that I have a meaningful birthday.
解析：
【分析】
本题要求以李华的身份，根据给定的生日活动表格内容，写英语短文分享生日庆祝方式。解题思路为：1. 先补全生日日期（5月10日）；2. 按上午、下午、晚上的时间顺序，依次描述对应活动，适当添加细节使内容连贯；3. 最后表达自己的感受，确保符合70词左右的要求，且不出现真实姓名和学校。
【解析】
写作时，首先确定生日日期为May 10th；上午部分，写吃妈妈做的长寿面，再和父母去农场看望爷爷奶奶；下午部分，写和父母种树，说明每年生日种一棵；晚上部分，写和朋友开派对，列举吃蛋糕、唱歌、跳舞、玩游戏等活动；最后表达开心、有意义的感受，注意语句通顺，用词准确，控制字数。
【答案】
How do I celebrate my birthday?
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. I'm 13 years old, and my birthday is on May 10th.
In the morning, I eat long noodles. My mother cooks the noodles for me. Then I visit my grandparents on the farm with my parents. In the afternoon, we plant a tree together. I plant one every year. In the evening, I have a birthday party with my friends. We eat the birthday cake, sing, dance and play games together. I feel very happy because my birthday is meaningful.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、时间顺序表达、日常活动描述
【点评】
本题为话题写作题，考查学生对给定信息的整合能力、英语语句的组织能力，以及常用表达的运用能力，要求学生能清晰按时间顺序描述事件，符合写作要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以李华的身份，根据给定的生日活动表格内容，写英语短文分享生日庆祝方式。解题思路为：1. 先补全生日日期（5月10日）；2. 按上午、下午、晚上的时间顺序，依次描述对应活动，适当添加细节使内容连贯；3. 最后表达自己的感受，确保符合70词左右的要求，且不出现真实姓名和学校。
【解析】
写作时，首先确定生日日期为May 10th；上午部分，写吃妈妈做的长寿面，再和父母去农场看望爷爷奶奶；下午部分，写和父母种树，说明每年生日种一棵；晚上部分，写和朋友开派对，列举吃蛋糕、唱歌、跳舞、玩游戏等活动；最后表达开心、有意义的感受，注意语句通顺，用词准确，控制字数。
【答案】
How do I celebrate my birthday?
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. I'm 13 years old, and my birthday is on May 10th.
In the morning, I eat long noodles. My mother cooks the noodles for me. Then I visit my grandparents on the farm with my parents. In the afternoon, we plant a tree together. I plant one every year. In the evening, I have a birthday party with my friends. We eat the birthday cake, sing, dance and play games together. I feel very happy because my birthday is meaningful.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、时间顺序表达、日常活动描述
【点评】
本题为话题写作题，考查学生对给定信息的整合能力、英语语句的组织能力，以及常用表达的运用能力，要求学生能清晰按时间顺序描述事件，符合写作要求。
【难度系数】
0.5