「2026山东济南高新区期中」
朋友似一面清澈的镜子,照见我们未曾发现的自己,引领我们走向更广阔的天地。我校英语报社举办以“My Friend, the Mirror in the Journey”为题的征文活动,请根据以下要点,写一篇征文。
→审主题
要点:1.你与好友相似还是不同?主要体现在哪些方面?
2.分享一次你们共同的经历。
3.这段友谊如何让你变成更好的一个人?
→审人称:第一、三人称
审时态:以一般现在时、一般过去时为主
要求:1.词数90左右;2.作文必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥。
→审词数
My Friend, the Mirror in the Journey
优秀范文
My Friend, the Mirror in the Journey
My best friend and I are different but get along well¹. She’s outgoing and loves talking to others, while² I’m quiet and like reading alone. However, we also have something in common¹. Both of us enjoy drawing.
Last month, we joined in a school drawing competition. I was too nervous to³ finish my work, but she sat beside me, cheering me up¹. With her help, I finished my picture and even won a small prize.
This friendship is like a mirror. It shows me I can be braver when I’m with others⁴. Thanks to her⁵, I’ve learned to open up¹ and become more confident.
初中英语
八年级
上册
人教版
亮点评析
①用丰富的动词短语get along well、have something in common、cheer...up、open up等展现作者的语言功底；
②用while引导并列分句,对比作者与好友的不同点；
③用too...to结构生动地展示比赛中紧张的心情；
④用省略that的宾语从句及when引导的时间状语从句展示了作者的转变；
⑤结尾用Thanks to回扣主题,直指对朋友的感谢之情,总结了这段友谊带来的益处。
朋友似一面清澈的镜子,照见我们未曾发现的自己,引领我们走向更广阔的天地。我校英语报社举办以“My Friend, the Mirror in the Journey”为题的征文活动,请根据以下要点,写一篇征文。
→审主题
要点:1.你与好友相似还是不同?主要体现在哪些方面?
2.分享一次你们共同的经历。
3.这段友谊如何让你变成更好的一个人?
→审人称:第一、三人称
审时态:以一般现在时、一般过去时为主
要求:1.词数90左右;2.作文必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥。
→审词数
My Friend, the Mirror in the Journey
优秀范文
My Friend, the Mirror in the Journey
My best friend and I are different but get along well¹. She’s outgoing and loves talking to others, while² I’m quiet and like reading alone. However, we also have something in common¹. Both of us enjoy drawing.
Last month, we joined in a school drawing competition. I was too nervous to³ finish my work, but she sat beside me, cheering me up¹. With her help, I finished my picture and even won a small prize.
This friendship is like a mirror. It shows me I can be braver when I’m with others⁴. Thanks to her⁵, I’ve learned to open up¹ and become more confident.
初中英语
八年级
上册
人教版
亮点评析
①用丰富的动词短语get along well、have something in common、cheer...up、open up等展现作者的语言功底；
②用while引导并列分句,对比作者与好友的不同点；
③用too...to结构生动地展示比赛中紧张的心情；
④用省略that的宾语从句及when引导的时间状语从句展示了作者的转变；
⑤结尾用Thanks to回扣主题,直指对朋友的感谢之情,总结了这段友谊带来的益处。
答案：My Friend, the Mirror in the Journey
My best friend and I are different but get along well. She’s outgoing and loves talking to others, while I’m quiet and like reading alone. However, we also have something in common. Both of us enjoy drawing.
Last month, we joined in a school drawing competition. I was too nervous to finish my work, but she sat beside me, cheering me up. With her help, I finished my picture and even won a small prize.
This friendship is like a mirror. It shows me I can be braver when I’m with others. Thanks to her, I’ve learned to open up and become more confident.
My best friend and I are different but get along well. She’s outgoing and loves talking to others, while I’m quiet and like reading alone. However, we also have something in common. Both of us enjoy drawing.
Last month, we joined in a school drawing competition. I was too nervous to finish my work, but she sat beside me, cheering me up. With her help, I finished my picture and even won a small prize.
This friendship is like a mirror. It shows me I can be braver when I’m with others. Thanks to her, I’ve learned to open up and become more confident.
解析：
【分析】首先明确本次征文主题为“My Friend, the Mirror in the Journey”，需覆盖三个核心要点：1. 与好友的异同；2. 共同经历；3. 友谊带来的益处。写作遵循“开头-中间-结尾”的结构：开头用while引导并列分句对比自身与好友的性格爱好，点明共同点；中间选取具体的过去经历（如参加绘画比赛），运用高分句式展现好友的帮助；结尾点题友谊的意义，总结对自身的积极影响，注意时态以一般现在、过去为主，词数控制在90左右。
【解析】1. 开头段：用while对比性格（好友外向爱交流，自己安静爱阅读），点明共同点（都喜欢画画）；2. 中间段：选取参加学校绘画比赛的经历，用too...to结构体现自己的紧张，用cheer up的伴随状语展现好友的鼓励，最后写自己的收获；3. 结尾段：点题友谊像镜子，用宾语从句和时间状语从句写自身转变，用Thanks to回扣主题，总结学会敞开心扉、变得自信。
【答案】My Friend, the Mirror in the Journey
My best friend and I are different but get along well. She’s outgoing and loves talking to others, while I’m quiet and like reading alone. However, we also have something in common. Both of us enjoy drawing.
Last month, we joined in a school drawing competition. I was too nervous to finish my work, but she sat beside me, cheering me up. With her help, I finished my picture and even won a small prize.
This friendship is like a mirror. It shows me I can be braver when I’m with others. Thanks to her, I’ve learned to open up and become more confident.
【知识点】英语应用文写作，英语句式运用，英语主题作文
【点评】本文紧扣征文主题，结构清晰完整，覆盖所有要求要点；运用while对比、too...to等高分句式，搭配丰富短语，语言流畅自然，准确体现友谊的意义，符合八年级英语写作要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 开头段：用while对比性格（好友外向爱交流，自己安静爱阅读），点明共同点（都喜欢画画）；2. 中间段：选取参加学校绘画比赛的经历，用too...to结构体现自己的紧张，用cheer up的伴随状语展现好友的鼓励，最后写自己的收获；3. 结尾段：点题友谊像镜子，用宾语从句和时间状语从句写自身转变，用Thanks to回扣主题，总结学会敞开心扉、变得自信。
【答案】My Friend, the Mirror in the Journey
My best friend and I are different but get along well. She’s outgoing and loves talking to others, while I’m quiet and like reading alone. However, we also have something in common. Both of us enjoy drawing.
Last month, we joined in a school drawing competition. I was too nervous to finish my work, but she sat beside me, cheering me up. With her help, I finished my picture and even won a small prize.
This friendship is like a mirror. It shows me I can be braver when I’m with others. Thanks to her, I’ve learned to open up and become more confident.
【知识点】英语应用文写作，英语句式运用，英语主题作文
【点评】本文紧扣征文主题，结构清晰完整，覆盖所有要求要点；运用while对比、too...to等高分句式，搭配丰富短语，语言流畅自然，准确体现友谊的意义，符合八年级英语写作要求。
【难度系数】0.6