写作实战 答案(含基础版范文和进阶版范文)D12
「2026 湖北武汉武珞路中学期中」
在我们成长的道路上,朋友是不可或缺的伙伴。他们也许与你志趣相投,仿佛世界上另一个“镜像”的自己;也许与你性格互补,为你打开新视野的“窗口”;也许是那个与你形影不离、分享所有小秘密的知己;也许是那个在你遇到困难时,毫不犹豫伸出援手的挚友……请结合以下问题写一篇英语短文,谈谈你最好的朋友,和你对友谊的看法。
内容提示:What do you have in common with your best friend?
How are you different from your best friend?
What is your idea about friendship?
Something more about friendship.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数 100 左右(开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。
Friends are important in our lives.
「2026 湖北武汉武珞路中学期中」
在我们成长的道路上,朋友是不可或缺的伙伴。他们也许与你志趣相投,仿佛世界上另一个“镜像”的自己;也许与你性格互补,为你打开新视野的“窗口”;也许是那个与你形影不离、分享所有小秘密的知己;也许是那个在你遇到困难时,毫不犹豫伸出援手的挚友……请结合以下问题写一篇英语短文,谈谈你最好的朋友,和你对友谊的看法。
内容提示:What do you have in common with your best friend?
How are you different from your best friend?
What is your idea about friendship?
Something more about friendship.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数 100 左右(开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。
Friends are important in our lives.
My best friend is Mia. We both love reading and we often spend weekends discussing the books we've finished.
However, we're quite different in some ways. I'm quiet and enjoy staying indoors, while she's outgoing and loves outdoor activities like hiking.
I think good friends should help each other.
When I'm sad, she always cares about me and cheers me up; when she faces difficulties, I help her solve the problems.
I think friendship is about accepting each other's differences and standing by one another.
With Mia's help, I learn to be more open to new things and feel warmer and brighter in daily life.
答案:主题写作专项
基础版范文
Friends are important in our lives. My best friend is Mia. We both love reading and we often spend weekends discussing the books we've finished. However, we're quite different in some ways. I'm quiet and enjoy staying indoors, while she's outgoing and loves outdoor activities like hiking.
I think good friends should help each other. When I'm sad, she always cares about me and cheers me up; when she faces difficulties, I help her solve the problems.
I think friendship is about accepting each other's differences and standing by one another. With Mia's help, I learn to be more open to new things and feel warmer and brighter in daily life.
进阶版范文
Friends are important in our lives. My best friend is Mia. We share a love for reading, so we often spend weekends discussing the books we've finished. However, we're quite different in some ways. I'm quiet and prefer staying indoors, while she's outgoing and loves outdoor activities like hiking.
To me, friendship is about mutual support. When I feel down, she's always there to lend me a hand and cheer me up; when she faces difficulties, I help her find solutions.
As the saying goes, "A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart." Thanks to Mia, I learn to be more open to new things and I know true friends make our ordinary lives warmer and brighter.
基础版范文
Friends are important in our lives. My best friend is Mia. We both love reading and we often spend weekends discussing the books we've finished. However, we're quite different in some ways. I'm quiet and enjoy staying indoors, while she's outgoing and loves outdoor activities like hiking.
I think good friends should help each other. When I'm sad, she always cares about me and cheers me up; when she faces difficulties, I help her solve the problems.
I think friendship is about accepting each other's differences and standing by one another. With Mia's help, I learn to be more open to new things and feel warmer and brighter in daily life.
进阶版范文
Friends are important in our lives. My best friend is Mia. We share a love for reading, so we often spend weekends discussing the books we've finished. However, we're quite different in some ways. I'm quiet and prefer staying indoors, while she's outgoing and loves outdoor activities like hiking.
To me, friendship is about mutual support. When I feel down, she's always there to lend me a hand and cheer me up; when she faces difficulties, I help her find solutions.
As the saying goes, "A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart." Thanks to Mia, I learn to be more open to new things and I know true friends make our ordinary lives warmer and brighter.
解析:
【分析】
写作时需紧扣题目给出的四个内容提示展开:①明确最好的朋友身份,写出与朋友的共同之处;②说明与朋友的不同之处;③表达对友谊的核心看法;④补充友谊带来的积极影响。开头已给出,需控制词数100左右,避免透露个人真实信息,语言要通顺自然。
【解析】
第一步,确定无真实信息的朋友名字(如Mia);第二步,对应提示点1:写共同爱好(如都爱阅读,周末讨论读过的书);第三步,对应提示点2:写差异(自己安静爱待室内,朋友外向爱户外活动);第四步,对应提示点3:谈友谊看法(如互相帮助、接纳彼此差异);第五步,对应提示点4:补充友谊带来的改变(如自己变得更开放)。最后调整语句,确保符合词数要求。
【答案】
Friends are important in our lives. My best friend is Mia. We both love reading and we often spend weekends discussing the books we've finished. However, we're quite different in some ways. I'm quiet and enjoy staying indoors, while she's outgoing and loves outdoor activities like hiking.
I think good friends should help each other. When I'm sad, she always cares about me and cheers me up; when she faces difficulties, I help her solve the problems.
I think friendship is about accepting each other's differences and standing by one another. With Mia's help, I learn to be more open to new things and feel warmer and brighter in daily life.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、友谊主题作文、英文短文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣所有内容提示,结构清晰逻辑连贯,准确表达对友谊的理解,语言简洁通顺,符合词数要求,是优秀的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.3
写作时需紧扣题目给出的四个内容提示展开:①明确最好的朋友身份,写出与朋友的共同之处;②说明与朋友的不同之处;③表达对友谊的核心看法;④补充友谊带来的积极影响。开头已给出,需控制词数100左右,避免透露个人真实信息,语言要通顺自然。
【解析】
第一步,确定无真实信息的朋友名字(如Mia);第二步,对应提示点1:写共同爱好(如都爱阅读,周末讨论读过的书);第三步,对应提示点2:写差异(自己安静爱待室内,朋友外向爱户外活动);第四步,对应提示点3:谈友谊看法(如互相帮助、接纳彼此差异);第五步,对应提示点4:补充友谊带来的改变(如自己变得更开放)。最后调整语句,确保符合词数要求。
【答案】
Friends are important in our lives. My best friend is Mia. We both love reading and we often spend weekends discussing the books we've finished. However, we're quite different in some ways. I'm quiet and enjoy staying indoors, while she's outgoing and loves outdoor activities like hiking.
I think good friends should help each other. When I'm sad, she always cares about me and cheers me up; when she faces difficulties, I help her solve the problems.
I think friendship is about accepting each other's differences and standing by one another. With Mia's help, I learn to be more open to new things and feel warmer and brighter in daily life.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、友谊主题作文、英文短文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣所有内容提示,结构清晰逻辑连贯,准确表达对友谊的理解,语言简洁通顺,符合词数要求,是优秀的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.3