经典例题
健康饮食对青少年的身体健康至关重要，不良的饮食习惯不利于青少年的成长。假设你是李华，你校的英文报社正在举行征文活动，现面向全校学生征稿，主题为“饮食与健康”，请你写一篇英语短文向报社投稿。
【内容】1. 简要介绍一些学生的不良饮食习惯及其产生的影响。
2. 谈谈健康饮食的好处。
3. 对如何保持健康提出你的建议，至少两点。
【要求】1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
2. 语句连贯。70词左右，文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Today, many students have some bad eating habits.
写作指导
1. 本文是一篇材料作文。
2. 时态为一般现在时。
3. 写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
写作模板
遣词造句
1. 不良的饮食习惯在我们学生中仍然是很常见的。（be common）
2. 我们中的一些人经常不吃早饭就去上学了。（without）
3. 为了保持健康，我们应当吃健康的食物。（keep fit）
高分范文
Today, many students have some bad eating habits. As we all know, we are what we eat. Bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some of us often go to school without eating breakfast. And some like to have snacks and are particular about food. In the long run, our health will be worse and worse.
To keep fit, we should eat healthy food. We'd better have meals regularly. We also need proper exercise.
In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. In this way, we can have enough energy to study better.
That's all. Thank you.
实战演练
假如你是李华，是一名七年级的学生。你的英国笔友 Michael 想知道中国学生是如何保持健康的。请你以自己为例，根据下面表格中所提示的内容给他回信。词数80左右。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Michael,
I'm happy to tell you how Chinese students keep healthy. And I would like to take myself as an example.
That's all I do for a healthy body. How about you?
Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
健康饮食对青少年的身体健康至关重要，不良的饮食习惯不利于青少年的成长。假设你是李华，你校的英文报社正在举行征文活动，现面向全校学生征稿，主题为“饮食与健康”，请你写一篇英语短文向报社投稿。
【内容】1. 简要介绍一些学生的不良饮食习惯及其产生的影响。
2. 谈谈健康饮食的好处。
3. 对如何保持健康提出你的建议，至少两点。
【要求】1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
2. 语句连贯。70词左右，文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Today, many students have some bad eating habits.
写作指导
1. 本文是一篇材料作文。
2. 时态为一般现在时。
3. 写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
写作模板
遣词造句
1. 不良的饮食习惯在我们学生中仍然是很常见的。（be common）
2. 我们中的一些人经常不吃早饭就去上学了。（without）
3. 为了保持健康，我们应当吃健康的食物。（keep fit）
高分范文
Today, many students have some bad eating habits. As we all know, we are what we eat. Bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some of us often go to school without eating breakfast. And some like to have snacks and are particular about food. In the long run, our health will be worse and worse.
To keep fit, we should eat healthy food. We'd better have meals regularly. We also need proper exercise.
In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. In this way, we can have enough energy to study better.
That's all. Thank you.
实战演练
假如你是李华，是一名七年级的学生。你的英国笔友 Michael 想知道中国学生是如何保持健康的。请你以自己为例，根据下面表格中所提示的内容给他回信。词数80左右。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Michael,
I'm happy to tell you how Chinese students keep healthy. And I would like to take myself as an example.
That's all I do for a healthy body. How about you?
Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案：[遣词造句]
1. Bad eating habits are still very common among us students.
2. Some of us often go to school without eating breakfast.
3. To keep fit, we should eat healthy food.
实战演练
One possible version
Dear Michael,
I'm happy to tell you how Chinese students keep healthy. And I would like to take myself as an example.
First of all, a healthy diet is very important, so I eat food like rice, eggs, fish and vegetables every day. I also eat more fruit and drink enough water. Snacks and fast food are bad for our health. I seldom eat them.
Also, I take enough exercise every week. It keeps me away from getting sick easily and helps me study well. I often do morning exercises. I also do many kinds of exercise. I usually walk, run, jump or play football after school. It makes me relaxed.
That's all I do for a healthy body. How about you?
Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
1. Bad eating habits are still very common among us students.
2. Some of us often go to school without eating breakfast.
3. To keep fit, we should eat healthy food.
实战演练
One possible version
Dear Michael,
I'm happy to tell you how Chinese students keep healthy. And I would like to take myself as an example.
First of all, a healthy diet is very important, so I eat food like rice, eggs, fish and vegetables every day. I also eat more fruit and drink enough water. Snacks and fast food are bad for our health. I seldom eat them.
Also, I take enough exercise every week. It keeps me away from getting sick easily and helps me study well. I often do morning exercises. I also do many kinds of exercise. I usually walk, run, jump or play football after school. It makes me relaxed.
That's all I do for a healthy body. How about you?
Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析：
【分析】
这是一篇给英国笔友的英文回信，需以七年级学生李华的身份，围绕“中国学生如何保持健康”展开，词数80左右，开头结尾已给出。解题思路：1. 承接开头，先写健康饮食的具体做法（吃健康食物、少吃垃圾食品）；2. 再写运动的具体做法（坚持锻炼，比如早操、课后运动）；3. 确保要点齐全（至少两点建议），用一般现在时，语句连贯，符合要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 确定时态为一般现在时，人称用第一人称I；2. 第一部分写健康饮食：说明自己每天吃米饭、鸡蛋、鱼、蔬菜，多吃水果、多喝水，少吃零食和快餐；3. 第二部分写运动：说明自己每周做足够运动，比如早操、课后散步、跑步、踢足球等，运动让自己少生病、学习好；4. 衔接结尾，控制词数在80左右，语句通顺，无真实信息。
【答案】
Dear Michael,
I'm happy to tell you how Chinese students keep healthy. And I would like to take myself as an example.
First of all, a healthy diet is very important, so I eat food like rice, eggs, fish and vegetables every day. I also eat more fruit and drink enough water. Snacks and fast food are bad for our health. I seldom eat them.
Also, I take enough exercise every week. It keeps me away from getting sick easily and helps me study well. I often do morning exercises. I also do many kinds of exercise. I usually walk, run, jump or play football after school. It makes me relaxed.
That's all I do for a healthy body. How about you?
Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、健康话题英语表达、一般现在时
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，要点明确（饮食、运动两点），语言符合七年级学生的词汇和句式水平，语句连贯，词数达标，准确完成了回信任务，符合要求。
【难度系数】
0.4
这是一篇给英国笔友的英文回信，需以七年级学生李华的身份，围绕“中国学生如何保持健康”展开，词数80左右，开头结尾已给出。解题思路：1. 承接开头，先写健康饮食的具体做法（吃健康食物、少吃垃圾食品）；2. 再写运动的具体做法（坚持锻炼，比如早操、课后运动）；3. 确保要点齐全（至少两点建议），用一般现在时，语句连贯，符合要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 确定时态为一般现在时，人称用第一人称I；2. 第一部分写健康饮食：说明自己每天吃米饭、鸡蛋、鱼、蔬菜，多吃水果、多喝水，少吃零食和快餐；3. 第二部分写运动：说明自己每周做足够运动，比如早操、课后散步、跑步、踢足球等，运动让自己少生病、学习好；4. 衔接结尾，控制词数在80左右，语句通顺，无真实信息。
【答案】
Dear Michael,
I'm happy to tell you how Chinese students keep healthy. And I would like to take myself as an example.
First of all, a healthy diet is very important, so I eat food like rice, eggs, fish and vegetables every day. I also eat more fruit and drink enough water. Snacks and fast food are bad for our health. I seldom eat them.
Also, I take enough exercise every week. It keeps me away from getting sick easily and helps me study well. I often do morning exercises. I also do many kinds of exercise. I usually walk, run, jump or play football after school. It makes me relaxed.
That's all I do for a healthy body. How about you?
Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、健康话题英语表达、一般现在时
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，要点明确（饮食、运动两点），语言符合七年级学生的词汇和句式水平，语句连贯，词数达标，准确完成了回信任务，符合要求。
【难度系数】
0.4