五、书面表达
请根据表格中的信息,以“My new friend”为题写一篇短文,介绍你的新朋友萨莉。词数70左右。

My new friend
请根据表格中的信息,以“My new friend”为题写一篇短文,介绍你的新朋友萨莉。词数70左右。
My new friend
答案:One possible version:
My new friend
Sally is my new friend. She is 13 years old.
She is in Class 5, Grade 7.
Her favourite subjects are English and Chinese.
She thinks they are interesting. She is good at them. She likes reading and playing the piano.
She is not tall. She has long hair. She looks very pretty. She is a polite girl and she is friendly to everyone. She makes many friends in her class.
All the teachers and classmates like her.
My new friend
Sally is my new friend. She is 13 years old.
She is in Class 5, Grade 7.
Her favourite subjects are English and Chinese.
She thinks they are interesting. She is good at them. She likes reading and playing the piano.
She is not tall. She has long hair. She looks very pretty. She is a polite girl and she is friendly to everyone. She makes many friends in her class.
All the teachers and classmates like her.
解析:
【分析】
这是一道人物介绍类书面表达题,解题思路为:1. 明确题目要求:以“My new friend”为题,结合表格信息写70词左右的短文介绍萨莉;2. 梳理表格信息:固定信息有姓名、年龄、班级、外貌、性格,需自拟最喜欢的科目、爱好、评论;3. 用一般现在时组织语句,确保覆盖所有信息点,语句通顺符合七年级英语水平。
【解析】
写作时,先开篇点明萨莉是新朋友,接着介绍年龄、班级;再补充自拟的最喜欢的科目(如英语、语文)及理由、爱好(如阅读、弹钢琴);然后描述外貌和性格;最后加上同学老师的评价,用简单句和常用句型,控制词数在70左右。
【答案】
One possible version:
My new friend
Sally is my new friend. She is 13 years old.
She is in Class 5, Grade 7.
Her favourite subjects are English and Chinese. She thinks they are interesting. She is good at them. She likes reading and playing the piano.
She is not tall. She has long hair. She looks very pretty. She is a polite girl and she is friendly to everyone. She makes many friends in her class.
All the teachers and classmates like her.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般现在时、人物介绍句型
【点评】
本题是基础人物介绍类书面表达题,给出明确信息提示,考察学生整合信息、运用简单句型的能力,适合七年级学生练习,能夯实写作基础。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一道人物介绍类书面表达题,解题思路为:1. 明确题目要求:以“My new friend”为题,结合表格信息写70词左右的短文介绍萨莉;2. 梳理表格信息:固定信息有姓名、年龄、班级、外貌、性格,需自拟最喜欢的科目、爱好、评论;3. 用一般现在时组织语句,确保覆盖所有信息点,语句通顺符合七年级英语水平。
【解析】
写作时,先开篇点明萨莉是新朋友,接着介绍年龄、班级;再补充自拟的最喜欢的科目(如英语、语文)及理由、爱好(如阅读、弹钢琴);然后描述外貌和性格;最后加上同学老师的评价,用简单句和常用句型,控制词数在70左右。
【答案】
One possible version:
My new friend
Sally is my new friend. She is 13 years old.
She is in Class 5, Grade 7.
Her favourite subjects are English and Chinese. She thinks they are interesting. She is good at them. She likes reading and playing the piano.
She is not tall. She has long hair. She looks very pretty. She is a polite girl and she is friendly to everyone. She makes many friends in her class.
All the teachers and classmates like her.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般现在时、人物介绍句型
【点评】
本题是基础人物介绍类书面表达题,给出明确信息提示,考察学生整合信息、运用简单句型的能力,适合七年级学生练习,能夯实写作基础。
【难度系数】
0.7