六、书面表达
学校是我们学习的天地,是我们成长的乐园。我们每天在校园里学习、生活,请你根据以下思维导图,以“My colourful school life”为题用英语介绍自己的学校生活。词数70左右。

My colourful school life
Hello, everyone! I'm a Grade 7 student. Today, I will tell you something about my colourful school life.
Come to my school. You'll find more interesting things to do.
学校是我们学习的天地,是我们成长的乐园。我们每天在校园里学习、生活,请你根据以下思维导图,以“My colourful school life”为题用英语介绍自己的学校生活。词数70左右。
My colourful school life
Hello, everyone! I'm a Grade 7 student. Today, I will tell you something about my colourful school life.
Come to my school. You'll find more interesting things to do.
答案:One possible version:
My colourful school life
Hello, everyone! I'm a Grade 7 student. Today, I will tell you something about my colourful school life.
As a student, I always listen to my teachers carefully in class. After class, I like going to the library. I think I can learn a lot from reading.
There are many clubs in our school. In the Art Club, I can not only paint but also sing and dance. I am a member of the Cooking Club as well. There, I learn to cook and make delicious food by myself.
To have a healthy body, I often play different ball games and practise swimming.
Besides, I spend my free time working as a volunteer. I enjoy helping others because helping others is helping ourselves.
Come to my school. You'll find more interesting things to do.
My colourful school life
Hello, everyone! I'm a Grade 7 student. Today, I will tell you something about my colourful school life.
As a student, I always listen to my teachers carefully in class. After class, I like going to the library. I think I can learn a lot from reading.
There are many clubs in our school. In the Art Club, I can not only paint but also sing and dance. I am a member of the Cooking Club as well. There, I learn to cook and make delicious food by myself.
To have a healthy body, I often play different ball games and practise swimming.
Besides, I spend my free time working as a volunteer. I enjoy helping others because helping others is helping ourselves.
Come to my school. You'll find more interesting things to do.
解析:
【分析】
本题是英语书面表达题,要求以“My colourful school life”为题,结合思维导图的信息介绍自己的学校生活。解题思路:1. 先明确思维导图的核心分支:study(课上、课后)、sport(球类运动、学游泳)、club(艺术俱乐部、烹饪俱乐部);2. 围绕各分支提取关键词,用简单句组织内容,符合七年级学生的英语水平;3. 遵循“引入-分述校园生活各方面-结尾邀请”的结构,确保内容连贯,词数符合要求。
【解析】
开头已给出,接下来按思维导图内容展开:①学习部分:课上认真听讲,课后可结合学习相关活动;②运动部分:常做球类运动,学习游泳;③俱乐部部分:加入艺术俱乐部,能画画、唱歌跳舞;加入烹饪俱乐部,学习做饭、制作美食;最后补充校园活动,结尾呼应邀请。写作时注意用词准确,语句通顺,符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My colourful school life
Hello, everyone! I'm a Grade 7 student. Today, I will tell you something about my colourful school life.
As a student, I always listen to my teachers carefully in class. After class, I like going to the library. I think I can learn a lot from reading.
There are many clubs in our school. In the Art Club, I can not only paint but also sing and dance. I am a member of the Cooking Club as well. There, I learn to cook and make delicious food by myself.
To have a healthy body, I often play different ball games and practise swimming.
Come to my school. You'll find more interesting things to do.
【知识点】
英语书面表达,话题写作,思维导图写作
【点评】
本题结合思维导图考查学生的英语书面表达能力,贴近学生校园生活,要求学生提取信息并组织成连贯短文,难度适中,能有效考查学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题是英语书面表达题,要求以“My colourful school life”为题,结合思维导图的信息介绍自己的学校生活。解题思路:1. 先明确思维导图的核心分支:study(课上、课后)、sport(球类运动、学游泳)、club(艺术俱乐部、烹饪俱乐部);2. 围绕各分支提取关键词,用简单句组织内容,符合七年级学生的英语水平;3. 遵循“引入-分述校园生活各方面-结尾邀请”的结构,确保内容连贯,词数符合要求。
【解析】
开头已给出,接下来按思维导图内容展开:①学习部分:课上认真听讲,课后可结合学习相关活动;②运动部分:常做球类运动,学习游泳;③俱乐部部分:加入艺术俱乐部,能画画、唱歌跳舞;加入烹饪俱乐部,学习做饭、制作美食;最后补充校园活动,结尾呼应邀请。写作时注意用词准确,语句通顺,符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My colourful school life
Hello, everyone! I'm a Grade 7 student. Today, I will tell you something about my colourful school life.
As a student, I always listen to my teachers carefully in class. After class, I like going to the library. I think I can learn a lot from reading.
There are many clubs in our school. In the Art Club, I can not only paint but also sing and dance. I am a member of the Cooking Club as well. There, I learn to cook and make delicious food by myself.
To have a healthy body, I often play different ball games and practise swimming.
Come to my school. You'll find more interesting things to do.
【知识点】
英语书面表达,话题写作,思维导图写作
【点评】
本题结合思维导图考查学生的英语书面表达能力,贴近学生校园生活,要求学生提取信息并组织成连贯短文,难度适中,能有效考查学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.3