八、书面表达
学校是我们成长的摇篮，是我们放飞梦想的地方。假如你是李红，就读于东方中学。请根据下列图示，以“My school”为题写一篇短文介绍你的学校。
注意：
1. 包含所有要点，并适当发挥；
2. 词数70左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My school
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hong, a new student at Dongfang Middle School.
学校是我们成长的摇篮，是我们放飞梦想的地方。假如你是李红，就读于东方中学。请根据下列图示，以“My school”为题写一篇短文介绍你的学校。
注意：
1. 包含所有要点，并适当发挥；
2. 词数70左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My school
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hong, a new student at Dongfang Middle School.
Now let me tell you something about my school.
We have a playground near the classroom building. It is very big and modern. In the centre of the school is the school hall. We have meetings there. There is also a library with different kinds of books. We like doing some reading there after lunch.
My teachers are kind and helpful. They are always ready to help with our lessons. My classmates are polite. I'm happy to study with them. We often help each other and learn from each other.
My home is not far from the school. I spend about 10 minutes walking there every day. I really enjoy walking.
Our school is nice. I believe I will have a great time here.
We have a playground near the classroom building. It is very big and modern. In the centre of the school is the school hall. We have meetings there. There is also a library with different kinds of books. We like doing some reading there after lunch.
My teachers are kind and helpful. They are always ready to help with our lessons. My classmates are polite. I'm happy to study with them. We often help each other and learn from each other.
My home is not far from the school. I spend about 10 minutes walking there every day. I really enjoy walking.
Our school is nice. I believe I will have a great time here.
答案：One possible version：
My school
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hong, a new student at Dongfang Middle School. Now let me tell you something about my school.
We have a playground near the classroom building. It is very big and modern. In the centre of the school is the school hall. We have meetings there. There is also a library with different kinds of books. We like doing some reading there after lunch.
My teachers are kind and helpful. They are always ready to help with our lessons. My classmates are polite. I'm happy to study with them. We often help each other and learn from each other.
My home is not far from the school. I spend about 10 minutes walking there every day. I really enjoy walking.
Our school is nice. I believe I will have a great time here.
My school
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hong, a new student at Dongfang Middle School. Now let me tell you something about my school.
We have a playground near the classroom building. It is very big and modern. In the centre of the school is the school hall. We have meetings there. There is also a library with different kinds of books. We like doing some reading there after lunch.
My teachers are kind and helpful. They are always ready to help with our lessons. My classmates are polite. I'm happy to study with them. We often help each other and learn from each other.
My home is not far from the school. I spend about 10 minutes walking there every day. I really enjoy walking.
Our school is nice. I believe I will have a great time here.
解析：
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求以李红的身份介绍东方中学，需围绕图示的四个核心要点（学校设施、师生情况、上学方式、个人感受）展开。解题思路：1. 衔接已给开头，引出介绍学校的主题；2. 依次介绍学校设施，补充功能细节；3. 描述老师和同学的特点，体现校园人际氛围；4. 说明自己的上学方式，补充距离、耗时等细节；5. 表达对学校的喜爱之情，完成全文。需确保涵盖所有要点，适当发挥，符合词数要求。
【解析】首先衔接开头，引出介绍学校的内容；接着介绍学校设施：如教室楼旁的大操场、中心的学校礼堂、有各类书籍的图书馆，补充各设施的用途；然后介绍老师友善乐于助人，同学礼貌互助；再说明家离学校近，每天步行上学约10分钟；最后表达对学校的喜爱，总结感受。写作时注意语句通顺，符合英语表达习惯，覆盖所有要点，适当添加细节使内容充实，词数符合要求。
【答案】One possible version：
My school
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hong, a new student at Dongfang Middle School. Now let me tell you something about my school.
We have a playground near the classroom building. It is very big and modern. In the centre of the school is the school hall. We have meetings there. There is also a library with different kinds of books. We like doing some reading there after lunch.
My teachers are kind and helpful. They are always ready to help with our lessons. My classmates are polite. I'm happy to study with them. We often help each other and learn from each other.
My home is not far from the school. I spend about 10 minutes walking there every day. I really enjoy walking.
Our school is nice. I believe I will have a great time here.
【知识点】英语书面表达、学校话题写作
【点评】本题围绕“我的学校”话题，给出明确写作要点，考查学生围绕要点组织语言的能力，属于基础话题写作题，要求学生准确覆盖所有要点，适当发挥细节，符合词数要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】首先衔接开头，引出介绍学校的内容；接着介绍学校设施：如教室楼旁的大操场、中心的学校礼堂、有各类书籍的图书馆，补充各设施的用途；然后介绍老师友善乐于助人，同学礼貌互助；再说明家离学校近，每天步行上学约10分钟；最后表达对学校的喜爱，总结感受。写作时注意语句通顺，符合英语表达习惯，覆盖所有要点，适当添加细节使内容充实，词数符合要求。
【答案】One possible version：
My school
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hong, a new student at Dongfang Middle School. Now let me tell you something about my school.
We have a playground near the classroom building. It is very big and modern. In the centre of the school is the school hall. We have meetings there. There is also a library with different kinds of books. We like doing some reading there after lunch.
My teachers are kind and helpful. They are always ready to help with our lessons. My classmates are polite. I'm happy to study with them. We often help each other and learn from each other.
My home is not far from the school. I spend about 10 minutes walking there every day. I really enjoy walking.
Our school is nice. I believe I will have a great time here.
【知识点】英语书面表达、学校话题写作
【点评】本题围绕“我的学校”话题，给出明确写作要点，考查学生围绕要点组织语言的能力，属于基础话题写作题，要求学生准确覆盖所有要点，适当发挥细节，符合词数要求。
【难度系数】0.6