七、书面表达
假设你是肖海,你的英国笔友保罗来信询问你未来的梦想。请你给他回一封邮件,介绍你的梦想及其产生原因、你为实现梦想所做的努力以及对未来的愿景。词数80—100左右。
Dear Paul,
I’m glad to receive your email. You asked about my dream in your letter. Well, my dream is to become .
Looking forward to hearing about your dream!
Yours,
Xiao Hai
假设你是肖海,你的英国笔友保罗来信询问你未来的梦想。请你给他回一封邮件,介绍你的梦想及其产生原因、你为实现梦想所做的努力以及对未来的愿景。词数80—100左右。
Dear Paul,
I’m glad to receive your email. You asked about my dream in your letter. Well, my dream is to become .
Looking forward to hearing about your dream!
Yours,
Xiao Hai
答案：One possible version:
Dear Paul,
I'm glad to receive your email. You asked about my dream job in your letter. Well, my dream is to become an aerospace (航空航天) engineer in the future.
When I was little, I watched the Shenzhou spaceship launch. The amazing scene and astronauts' stories deeply inspired me. Since then, I've dreamt of working in aerospace.
To make it come true, I study Maths and Physics hard. I also read books about aerospace and join my school's aerospace science club. We do small experiments there, which helps me learn more.
I hope to design more advanced spacecraft one day and contribute to China's aerospace industry.
Looking forward to hearing about your dream job!
Yours,
Xiao Hai
Dear Paul,
I'm glad to receive your email. You asked about my dream job in your letter. Well, my dream is to become an aerospace (航空航天) engineer in the future.
When I was little, I watched the Shenzhou spaceship launch. The amazing scene and astronauts' stories deeply inspired me. Since then, I've dreamt of working in aerospace.
To make it come true, I study Maths and Physics hard. I also read books about aerospace and join my school's aerospace science club. We do small experiments there, which helps me learn more.
I hope to design more advanced spacecraft one day and contribute to China's aerospace industry.
Looking forward to hearing about your dream job!
Yours,
Xiao Hai
解析：
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以肖海的身份给英国笔友保罗回邮件，介绍自己的梦想，需涵盖梦想职业、产生原因、实现梦想的努力、未来愿景四个要点，词数控制在80-100左右。解题思路：首先选择一个有具体素材支撑的梦想职业（如航空航天工程师，结合中国航天事件易组织内容）；接着对应四个要点依次展开：原因结合个人经历（如童年看神舟发射的启发），努力列举具体行动（学数理、读相关书籍、参加社团），愿景明确积极方向；最后遵循邮件格式，确保语句通顺、逻辑连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 确定核心内容：选择航空航天工程师作为梦想职业，贴合学生熟悉的中国航天素材；
2. 阐述梦想原因：回忆童年观看神舟发射的震撼场景，受宇航员故事启发，自然引出梦想；
3. 说明努力行动：列举学习数学物理、阅读航天书籍、参加学校航天社团做实验等具体做法，体现为梦想付出的努力；
4. 表达未来愿景：明确希望设计先进航天器、助力中国航天事业的目标；
5. 遵循邮件格式，使用恰当书信用语，控制词数，保证内容完整、逻辑清晰。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Paul,
I'm glad to receive your email. You asked about my dream job in your letter. Well, my dream is to become an aerospace (航空航天) engineer in the future.
When I was little, I watched the Shenzhou spaceship launch. The amazing scene and astronauts' stories deeply inspired me. Since then, I've dreamt of working in aerospace.
To make it come true, I study Maths and Physics hard. I also read books about aerospace and join my school's aerospace science club. We do small experiments there, which helps me learn more.
I hope to design more advanced spacecraft one day and contribute to China's aerospace industry.
Looking forward to hearing about your dream job!
Yours,
Xiao Hai
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、话题作文（梦想）、时态运用
【点评】
本题是初中英语常见的话题书面表达题，贴近学生生活实际，要求明确，既考查学生对书信格式的掌握，又考查学生围绕主题组织内容、运用英语表达的能力，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以肖海的身份给英国笔友保罗回邮件，介绍自己的梦想，需涵盖梦想职业、产生原因、实现梦想的努力、未来愿景四个要点，词数控制在80-100左右。解题思路：首先选择一个有具体素材支撑的梦想职业（如航空航天工程师，结合中国航天事件易组织内容）；接着对应四个要点依次展开：原因结合个人经历（如童年看神舟发射的启发），努力列举具体行动（学数理、读相关书籍、参加社团），愿景明确积极方向；最后遵循邮件格式，确保语句通顺、逻辑连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 确定核心内容：选择航空航天工程师作为梦想职业，贴合学生熟悉的中国航天素材；
2. 阐述梦想原因：回忆童年观看神舟发射的震撼场景，受宇航员故事启发，自然引出梦想；
3. 说明努力行动：列举学习数学物理、阅读航天书籍、参加学校航天社团做实验等具体做法，体现为梦想付出的努力；
4. 表达未来愿景：明确希望设计先进航天器、助力中国航天事业的目标；
5. 遵循邮件格式，使用恰当书信用语，控制词数，保证内容完整、逻辑清晰。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Paul,
I'm glad to receive your email. You asked about my dream job in your letter. Well, my dream is to become an aerospace (航空航天) engineer in the future.
When I was little, I watched the Shenzhou spaceship launch. The amazing scene and astronauts' stories deeply inspired me. Since then, I've dreamt of working in aerospace.
To make it come true, I study Maths and Physics hard. I also read books about aerospace and join my school's aerospace science club. We do small experiments there, which helps me learn more.
I hope to design more advanced spacecraft one day and contribute to China's aerospace industry.
Looking forward to hearing about your dream job!
Yours,
Xiao Hai
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、话题作文（梦想）、时态运用
【点评】
本题是初中英语常见的话题书面表达题，贴近学生生活实际，要求明确，既考查学生对书信格式的掌握，又考查学生围绕主题组织内容、运用英语表达的能力，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5